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By : slygriff21
  • From ANON - TaintedAngel on February 22, 2005
    OOOoooOOO yeah another chapter...dododododdoooooo hehe
    " ...thick, soft, raven hair..." oooo nice!!
    Enjoyed it very much....cant wait untill next chapter!! *pulls up a chair and sits arms folded waiting ever so paitently*
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  • From ANON - June on February 22, 2005
    Ch 2 - Harry and Ron are sure being controlling of her. I'm glad Draco stood up for her. Is the war over (Voldemort dead, etc.)? How did Draco end up being a good guy? This is a Severus-Hermione romance, right? Not Draco-Hermione? Thanks for the new chapter!!
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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on February 21, 2005
    Very good beginning, I've often thought that Ron and Harry do tend to rely greatly on Hermione a little to much.
    Naughty Severus putting a spell on her journal, oh well once a spy always a spy I suppose.

    Yes, a good start, now all we need is lots of regular updates.
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  • From ANON - Perry on February 21, 2005
    You might wish to fix some things that are very much out of canon: Hermione's second name is "Jane", according to Jo Rowling herself, and Hermione is probably an only child. JKR said she toyed with the idea of giving her a SISTER, but figured it was too late now. Other than the canon issues, this is a decent start.
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  • From ANON - momnipotent on February 21, 2005
    Great beginning. I can't wait to read more. I like the idea that she is not so enchanted with Harry & Ron. I like tha idea that she was not an only child. Gives her a bit more family knowledge. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - killergirl on February 21, 2005
    very good start i hope you will update soon
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  • From ANON - TaintedAngel on February 21, 2005
    *Click* okay added to my favorites :-) I am so excitied to see where this story will go!! I love SS/HG fics!
    Waiting impatiently for next installment....
    Tainted Angel xxx
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on February 21, 2005
    I like how you have started this. A couple of tiny errors, but nothing that held me back from enjoying this. Knowing Severus I have a feeling he's going to use that newly acquired book to his advantage. Hopefully she won't hex his balls off if she ever finds out he's got it.

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - pinkyheather on February 21, 2005
    interesting start, I can't wait to see where you go from here.
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  • From ANON - June on February 21, 2005
    Ch 1 - nice start! I hope you show us later how Severus felt the night her parents and brother got killed by Voldemort - if Severus tried to get help, then he must have known that Hermione had just lost her family. Did he have any concern for her then? Looking forward to more chapters.
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