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Reviews for Just one of those days

By : lilolme
  • From jaimelee on February 28, 2008
    Interesting start. I hope you'll update soon as I'd like to see what she does for his birthday. =)
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  • From Utopia on February 28, 2008
    I
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  • From Dobbydot on February 28, 2008
    an ok begining, but you really need to take out the shorthand when you publish, spell out the word YOU instead of u. I noticed you did that a couple of times, as a reader (and this is my opinion) it really distracts from the story and it seems kinda childish to me. But overall, not a bad start. Good luck with the rest of your fic.
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  • From bananasforyou on February 27, 2008
    i love it!
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  • From Verie on February 27, 2008
    that is HOT!

    you will update sooner than before aren't you?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on May 23, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 04, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Rasha on March 01, 2005
    well it was quick and right to the point....i like thigns building up and this story didn't do that.....you were good with the wording though...keep it up! sorry didn't mea nto be harsh but trying to tell ya what i think becasue my opinion matters:) love ya
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  • From ANON - ... on March 01, 2005
    Not bad. Not bad at all. I like it, are you goingot continue?
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  • From ANON - wannadraco on March 01, 2005
    DAMN I WISH I WERE HERMIONE!!!!!! Thats really HOT!!!!!Please updaate soon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - LadyMalfoy on March 01, 2005
    Damn that's hot. I love it! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Dracosdragon on February 28, 2005
    Pretty good so far! I enjoyed it please continue!
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