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Reviews for What you never thought you\'d be.

By : kialiana999
  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on November 27, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 11, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - jessfelton on November 10, 2005
    u have to update omg that was such a fucking fantastic first chappie i loved it
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  • From ANON - Candy b on September 26, 2005
    please write more I hate to read a very good unfinished story
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 05, 2005
    HURRY HURRY hurry
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  • From ANON - LadyMalfoy on March 02, 2005
    It's good so far. Just check your spelling and don't rush things. Tsk tsk Hermione for acting so easy in his dreams! She better not be that way in real life! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - lilil on March 01, 2005
    Very Nice! Well, Cant say much..........So better update next chap soon hie hie hie
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 01, 2005
    Kind of a short chapter. I don't get what the plot its, but it is only the first chapter so...

    You should proof read a bit more. There were simple mistakes such as switching "buy" with "by" that should not exist. (And "dam" should be "damn") Spell check on MSWord or whatever program you use won't catch things like that, make sure you, or a beta does.

    Also the "my lady" and "oh Draco"/"oh Hermione" can get really cliche, really fast, so be careful how you use common phrases like these.

    I'm really interested based on your summary where this story will go, so please update! Besides, as annoying as the phrase is, its very true. "Practice makes perfect."
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  • From ANON - liz on March 01, 2005
    this is an awsome story iv hade dreams like that bout my worst enemy and we aint enemys no more (winks) anyways keep up the good work i give it 5 stars.
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