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Reviews for His Eyes

By : chronicallybemused
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 05, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 28, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - Morbie on March 03, 2005
    it reads a bit rushed, i don't knwo if you were having trouble expressing yourself while writting it or not, but it seems hurried.

    It's lacking structure and flow, and it leaves me wanting.

    It's a good attempt, but it just doesn't feel like a finished piece.

    keep in mind, this is meant as constructive critisism, and should be taken as such. I am in no way bashing your piece at all, just offering my opinion, for what it's worth.
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  • From TaintedAnjel on March 02, 2005
    Hello
    ummm...Well I did like it. I would have loved more detail. It wasnt really erotic in any way. But I did enjoy the idea of it and the writing was very good.
    TaintedAngel xxx
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