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By : SnowflakeImp
  • From ANON - pumkin on October 10, 2006
    just found the story. i love it. it has me laughing and some parts and wondering in others. keep up the good work. can't wait for more. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Amiastine on October 09, 2006
    Wow, I was really looking forward to this chapter and I can't say I'm disappointed!! It was great! I especially like the idea of visions of what it was like before she was Purged coming back to Hermione, especially in such a fashion. Also, I really liked the way you had Draco 'apologize' to Hermione... very in-character with how I imagine him!!! He's really great in this fic, and so are the other characters...
    The only thing that bothers me slightly is Blaise... sure, it's nice of him to take things slow with Hermione, but that slowly? It's suspicious... or at least it seems so to me. Either he's using her for some other purpose and doesn't actually really want to get involved (but still wants their budding relationship to remain credible) or else he's being far too overly courteous... ack!
    Anyway, please write more!!! I find your fic fascinating and enthralling!!!
    Amiastine
    PS: I read 'Draco Malfoy, the Amazing Bouncing Rat' a few years ago... that fic was amazingly funny...
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  • From ANON - ddf on October 09, 2006
    This is a great story. Personally, I'm glad that there's little substance, that it's not all fluff. I think chapter 11 made a fine transition chapter. Of course, I won't be able to know for sure until you update--please do it soon!
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  • From QuicksilverEyes on October 09, 2006
    WOW!!! This story is amazing! It gets better and better with each chapter. I love your quirky humor and am drawn in by your unique story line. Your portrayal of Draco is so HOTT and believeable. I was never a fan of those namby-pamby Dracos either, lol! I definitely don't have this story figured out, but I've got my ideas. *mysterious shifty look* Blaise kinda freaks me out to no end and I love how Draco is losing his cool (well as much as someone so damn suave can lose his cool :P)

    GUH! That sex scene was hott, have no fear my lovely. Closet quickkies are always super hot. And I think I caught a clue when Hermione nearly freaked out about being grabbed. Something happen way back when, hmmm?

    One question, if the Purge (which made me think a lot about the movie Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind, teehee) was supposed to make it seem like a lot of time had passed between now and the war, why can't Hermione remember about being with Draco? Or was it because she was one of those with the intense WWW session? So many questions to ponder...

    Can't wait for the next chappie! Do you have an LJ?


    Quicksilver Eyes


    PS - Hope the job hunting went/is going well!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 04, 2006
    really addicting story. Keep writing, I'm really enjoying it.
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  • From ANON - jenny on October 04, 2006
    please, put your faithful followers out of their misery and update soon. we love and worship you
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  • From ANON - Imp on October 02, 2006
    Imp just imp like madonna or whatever her name is. I wuv the fic continue writing.
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  • From ANON - Kit on October 02, 2006
    That chapter was wonderful!!! I loved the part when Draco "apologizes". I think this is my favorite story so far. And please, please, I beg you, please, pretty please, update soon!!!!!! Great chapter and I really, really, really love your Draco.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 01, 2006
    This fic is fabulous!! I wasn't too taken with it at first, because Hermione seemed a bit OOC. But it really grew on me, and I *really* love how you've characterized Draco, and their interactions. I can't wait for the more angsty, dark stuff- I love that kind of thing. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - tina on September 30, 2006
    Hey! I've been reading your story for quite some time, but haven't had the time to drop a review. Now that I finally have five minutes, I'm more than glad to write a few lines.

    First, wonderful story. Congratulations for the extreamly polished and detailed plot, the wonderful details, the marvelous big picture, the very In-Character charries and the humor mix. It's the closest thing to perfection in a fanfic and you deserve a prize of some sort for writing it. I love your portrail of Hermione, although I can't really imagine her doing the puppy eyes scene with Ron. BTW, Ron's a great deal how I imagine him and the rest of the Weasleys, too. I can't wait till you write the Picnic/Sleepover party. Draco is absolutely charming in this story, I like the side stories that go with him (the girls he goes out with that later on go to Hermione to confort them). I've read Draco, the amazing bouncing...Rat? by Maya and indeed, your portrail of the Slytherin does resembles the one from the story. Though your Draco doesn't have a weird and obsessive addiction for coffee, lol. Or maybe it does have and we don't know yet? >> Blaise is such a mystery. I'm very much expecting something more about him and why is Hermione acting so... instictively passive towards him. Something from the past, maybe? I can't wait!

    Second, oh my Lord, the plot! I love it. As uneventful this story is, it does have a very eventful past-plot, or something like that and I just love the way it surfaces in the story, confusing the hell out of the readers as well out of the characters. Hmm... Seems like the writer is the only God in this story, since you controll your characters and their story so well. The way the dark past blends in with the confusing future and the "uneventful" present is just perfect. Don't worry about explaining too many things, I was pretty confused with how come they led such normal lives after the war and the explanation was a very satisfying one. The timing was also perfect, since if it would have appeared sooner in the story it would have been typical and slightly cliche (as all authors try to explain the world their characters are moving in and most of them do it too soon in the story) and later on, the suspense would have eventually killed all readers or at least bored me. :P

    Third, finally smut! And a likeable one, too. Great closet shag, although typical. It had that slight tinge of the obsessively cliched and used, but with the right amount of talent (in your case, monumental), you managed to built it right. I rolled my eyes as soon as I read the line in which he pulls her into the closet. But I love this story way too much to just close the window and scream CLICHE! So I went on reading and liked it. Good for you, you made something recycled look good ;).

    Well, hope you liked this piece of my mind, I have to run. Update ASAP and good luck finding a job! XX
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  • From ANON - Cwolf on September 30, 2006
    All I can say is that this story is amazing. I love the dialogue between the characters the most, a great combination of humor and cunning. Great work.
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  • From ANON - Ashlie on September 29, 2006
    I loved this chapter. You managed to get all the explanations in and still make it interesting. This is by far one of my favorite D/Hr stories. And I never give feedback. This is the first time I have because I love this story so much. Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Revecka on September 29, 2006
    Nice..........Very NICE

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  • From ANON - Rae on September 29, 2006
    Oooh... hidden memories resurfacing! I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 28, 2006
    Amazing. Simply amazing. I love the story and can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon!
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