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Reviews for The Uneventful Story

By : SnowflakeImp
  • From ANON - Sarah on September 06, 2006
    I for one beg to differ, for you are an excellent writer and extrememly talented in my eyes. I've been waiting for updates on all the Draco/Hermione stories I can't get enough of (they're the only fan fics I read) and was just perusing through stories I haven't taken a look at yet and might suit my fancy when I came across yours at the top of the list. And, seeing as how I've just stayed up till 3 in the morning so as to read all the chapters you've written in one, I'd say you've become my latest addiction.

    Furthermore, I agree with you wholeheartedly that a truly good D/H story is not complete without a dark twist. All that lovey dovey stuff can be saved for other pairings. Usually the best stories are riddled with nothing but pain and passion and lust, and sometimes love, but you have somehow managed to include a decent amount of humor and witty banter as well. Plus the way you've led the story along is tantalisingly slow, but it's a good kind of torture, one where the story has a chance to unfold much like a well written novel. And with all these flashbacks to the war that are so short and unreadable (though I don't mean that literally) they're like breadcrumbs you've added a sense of mystery and suspense that I adore.

    I eagerly await your next update if not for your deliciously long and thought consuming chapters, than for your disclaimers which amuse me to no end.

    P.S. Rarely do I ever review a story unless it's really damn good, let alone spend half an hour doing so, and it's usually just to give a short compliment and demand that they update. So, in other words, I certainly hope you feel flattered.

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  • From ANON - pinkwands on September 06, 2006
    gods this story is hilarious!anyone can see that Draco picks on HG cause he lurrrves her hehe gods I hope he bids on her or alot of people bid on her :D

    ohhh Blaise winning her against Draco would be grand! :D
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  • From ANON - ^.^Cat on September 05, 2006
    Oh you're just evil for splitting it into two parts (but with great timing though). It really just makes my day to see this fic updated, it's just lovely and funny and Hermione is such an endearing character. Hmmm, who will get Hermione from the auction? I think Blaise should, let Draco stew for a little while. But I wonder when her flashbacks will really come out. Who kidnapped her? And what's with the pink incident? Oooooh I want to know! *sigh* but I suppose I'll just have to wait for the update. Oh btw, you really should try and put this fic up on the Coloured Grey d/hr archive. And good luck with the job hunting! ^.^
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  • From ANON - Moonstar on September 05, 2006
    More more more!!!! I can't wait to see what happens when Hermione takes the stage!!!!
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  • From ANON - Heather on September 05, 2006
    I love this fic. And you know what? I think it'll be just fine if it gets a little dark. You need a balance. Please update soon! I'm dying to see who gets Hermione!!! (Blaise, or Draco? Hmm..)
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  • From ANON - firewall on September 05, 2006
    As long as you keep the repartee going between Hermione and Draco, it's not a problem. Make it light, make it darker. I don't care as long as you keep them going.
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  • From ANON - aarthi on September 05, 2006
    hey. just wanted to say the story is awsome. and it's def. cool how hermione and malfoy have a hot/cold relationship...well mostly cold/colder relationship. keep up the awsome work!
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  • From ANON - BartXena on September 05, 2006
    Hmmm, sorry, don't buy it. After how utterly HORRID they were to each other, it's too fast, unjustified. Also, the characterisations aren't rock solid.
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  • From ANON - BartXena on September 05, 2006
    You may not realise it, but there are three Simpsons refs in that chapter. Actually the first one isn't on your list. I recognised them right away.
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  • From ANON - darian on September 05, 2006
    Look don't make me come over there.....I need a update...soon! :)
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  • From ANON - moxie on September 05, 2006
    yay! *hyperventilatng in happiness* wow, another (quick) update. happiness. can I say again just how much I love this freakin story? seriously. sadness though that you said the next update would take longer. *meep* This one was so, so good. I feel so bad for Hermione. She's looks so beautiful, but no one even noticed her. Curious. Not even her friends commented that she looked pretty. Odd. Oh god I would die if I had to be auctioned. Please say Blaise is there. (I like the sweet letter). Please. I'm glad though - it's not what I thought would happen. Why is Draco such a prat!! Argh! Thank you so much for clearing up that bit of confusion on my part. I guess my paranoia is running on overdrive...Also, a creative outlet (like updating the next chapter) would be an amazing source of relaxtion during your job search. Good luck with that!
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  • From ANON - Ladeda on September 04, 2006
    Great story!
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  • From ANON - MEMEMEMEME on September 03, 2006
    So here is some of my thoughts on what I think may happen. (This is probably going to sound totally crazy..but that's okay, this is only one of my many personalities talking) So I believe that Draco may have done something..not..so good to Hermione (or something like that). Why do I believe this? Because you wrote that Harry had a strange feeling about Malfoy when he, Malfoy, was rubbing Hermies temples. Harry felt the urge to protect Hermie (im too lazy to write Hermione, so pardon me) from Draco, even though he didn't know why (why else would he feel that way?). Also, I believe that Blaise knows about this...And Blaise is a crazy mo'fo (not really, well maybe, but I felt that my predictions would be inadequate without saying someone was crazy...makes me feel better)..Also..I believe Mindee may be a factor in Hermie learning more about Drakies feelings for her (awwwwwwww...doesnt that sound cute!) But yeah, I also believe that peoples were obliviated because more than just warfare was waged during the epic battle ( DUN DUN DUN...)...

    But anyways, GREAT story, me likie story..me likie story (...from family guy...don't ask questions)

    I hope you continue to write often! Makes me all excited...




    (On a more personal note, I am very tired...So if I am completely wrong about everything I said, or I appear to be just a slight bit crazy....We can all just blame it on delusions caused by lack of sleep....Yeah..sounds about right...)
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  • From ANON - Phiekers on September 03, 2006
    I have to say that I am in looooooove (see how many o's are in there? this is like hardcore!) with your writing. You are totally awesome (and by totally awesome, I mean totally sweet) at giving hints and clues but still making it difficult to predict all at the same time! I have a feeling about how dark this story may get, and it makes it even more exciting! I REALLLLY hope you update again soon! When I first came to AFF (like a year ago) YOUR story was one of the first ones I read, and I immediately fell in love with it. I kind of went out of my Potter Stage for awhile, but the other day I came back and I saw that you had updated quite a bit (in fact I only came back to see if you had updated or not)...And let me tell you...I am back in the Potter Stage again. I have also read The Politicians Wife, and Temporary Insanity...And I love them both too! But your fic is my favourite because you keep it so funny (I luff it!)...Anywho...This is like my once in a while groupie message that I sometimes get the urge to write, and hey, its to you! So yeah...keep the good shtuff coming...

    And if there are anymore post-hogwarts D/Hr fics you want to recommand, I'd be TOTALLY grateful!

    Thanks!
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  • From ANON - firewall on September 02, 2006
    I was thinking afterwards about your comment that some of your readers had figured out the story and your writing was too simplistic...I don't think so, m'dear! Your story is complex and exhilarating. Hermione with her potty mouth was amazing...you are an able writer to be able to have all the multilevels in your story.
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