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By : belladonnacordial
  • From on April 07, 2005
    Exceptionally well written this story is. I really am enjoying it much. I like your version of Draco and Harry. They have great chemistry together, and compliment eachother well. I'm glad Draco has grown up. Interesting devices- the memory crystal, Draco's bed, and I just love the Time Turner Cafe (why can't I get a job there and look younger every day?) Very clever you must be. While the sex scenes are just beautiful, the emotional aspects and the plot, make this very satisfying to read. In the last chapter, St. George and the Dragon reference made me laugh a lot. What no sheep? I don't guess Draco would tell that part. That's another thing I really love, THE HUMOUR! Am placing on recs right now
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  • From ANON - dedmun on April 06, 2005
    this is one of the best stories i've read on here. totally love the plot and all the stuff in it. the bed was a great idea, and i really enjoyed it's story. so happy you post so fast. keep up the great writing, and post again soon.
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  • From ANON - Yana on April 06, 2005
    hahahahahaha poor harry
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  • From RagingPheonix on April 06, 2005
    Wonderful lemon. Now that it's finally finished! Hilarious aftermath. I like that. "The Orgasm That Broke the Bed," that is funny stuff! There is no reason for modesty on that one. I should like give you a dollar or something.

    Pheonix,
    I just spent the last 11 hours beating on a few people in Dynasty Warriors 4.
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  • From RagingPheonix on April 03, 2005
    What kind of sick and twisted mind can you possibly have? THAT WAS THE SAME CHAPTER BUT IN A DIFFERENT POINT OF VIEW!!! Still left in th middle of a lemon. Still leaving me unsatisfied. Still making me want to attack you. Grrrrrrr. Next chapter, now! And it better be a good lemon if you're gonna put me and the other reviewers through this! Blah!

    Pheonix,
    You are more boring than,how you say hellaaaa, Clay Aiken's Christmas Album.
    -Persian Tow Truck Man to John Kerry (Mad TV 10th season)
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  • From ANON - moi on April 02, 2005
    i love this chapter. it is, in my opinion, the best thing that you have ever written. it got very philosophical at times, and was very draco. i loved it, please update.
    ~moi
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  • From ANON - gabby on April 02, 2005
    that was your best work yet. visually emotional, beautiful. keep it up.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on April 02, 2005
    Loved chapter 14! I love this Draco! Dark and Light all in one. Fantastic!
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  • From ANON - Yana on April 02, 2005
    hahahahahah Draco is really possessive of Harry
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  • From RagingPheonix on March 29, 2005
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You can't do that! That's is cruel and evil! Evil! You can't stop in the middle of a lemon! There should be laws against that.

    Pheonix,
    EVIL!
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  • From writeright on March 29, 2005
    Okay, you're hitting on bondage and control and all that fun stuff...my absolute favorite kinks. Write the next chapter now, dammit, or else I'll be too frustrated to think of what else I was going to comment on. Oh yeah, I don't like your Narcissa. Meant to say that last time, but I have a hard time believing that Draco's parents would accept the possibility of him being gay, much less the thought of him and Harry being together.

    CP the sore
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  • From ANON - swampthang on March 29, 2005
    Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Fefs on March 29, 2005
    Humpf.. You did not just end the chapter on that part, right? I'm alucinating... Yes.. i'm very sure that if i close my eyes this would have been a very bad dream.... *fefs closes her eyes* O.O
    OH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! You better update this really soon you mean person! No hugs for you! >=(
    Ps: I love this fic... hihi so cute... I want them... *Fefs daydreams*
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  • From ANON - fifespice on March 29, 2005
    malfoy is a sex maniac isn't he
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  • From ANON - Yana on March 29, 2005
    hahahahhahahahahaaha poor Harry
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