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Reviews for Unity

By : belladonnacordial
  • From jazzylady on March 08, 2005
    Wow! That made me wet by just reading it. I absolutely LOVE your story. When will people start to realize that Harry and Draco are no longer enemies? Will Fred and George be the first to find out? Anyways, keep up the excellent work, and update soon!
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  • From ANON - Loki on March 08, 2005
    Wonderful. More please!
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  • From ANON - Yana on March 07, 2005
    ooo go Draco
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  • From writeright on March 07, 2005
    *Disclaimer: This review is just my own two cents. Follow it or ignore at your own whim.*

    First of all, this really isn't believeable Harry/Draco. Draco isn't the kind of person to form his own thoughts unless the truth is shoved in his face. He sees the world in black and white, no middle ground, so I can never see him as being with Harry at all unless it's just a stupid one-shot deal. As for Harry, he's stubborn and may not be willing to accept that people change, so even if Draco was different, he wouldn't believe it.

    Secondly, all the family history shit I read today makes no sense. I don't understand how magic could "die out" in a family line just because a squib marries a muggle. And, though Hermione is very powerful, I still think that halfbloods have the potential to be even moreso. Just look at Voldemort, after all.

    Also, I doubt that Hogwarts would test students for magical potential. It would only lead to students bragging and picking on one another based on who had more potential than other people. The teachers may know, true, but they wouldn't talk about it openly.

    That all being said, I do like your writing style and I'm probably going to keep reading this just for shits and giggles. It's not bad, just implausible.

    CP the critic
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on March 07, 2005
    Holy moly! That is powerful! Both of them have all four founders? Harry has Grindlewald as well plus Dumbledore? Wow! Bring on the next chapter! I can't wait for more! If they join sides things might work for the best!
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  • From ANON - ladyicondraco on March 06, 2005
    CURSE YOU!! Why must you leave it there! I love this so far. Your description of the status quo was excellent!
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  • From ANON - Yana on March 06, 2005
    cool story
    i love dominant Draco
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  • From ANON - DM on March 05, 2005
    YAY! More! More! More!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on March 05, 2005
    Oh I like! Can't wait for more! Need chapter 5! More!!!!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on March 05, 2005
    Harry's out on his own! And he sent the crystal! Too wonderful! Can't wait until chapter 4! Keep up the fantastic work!
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  • From ANON - PrideAndPrejudice on March 05, 2005
    love the story. love the idea. love the writing style...pretty much love everything.......don't love clifeies(sp) though. even though they keep me reading i still hate them. but you do an excellent job on them and on updating so i'm willing to let it slide....keep up the good work. later days and KUDOS!
    pap
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  • From ANON - ningchan on March 04, 2005
    dude!
    good!
    mooooooooooooore!
    that was really origional! never read nething like that (and have read most things *grins*)
    keep up the good work!
    love ning
    ...oh....MORE DIRTYNESS!
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  • From ANON - loni on March 04, 2005
    don't be cruel and leave it there! update soon!
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  • From Reyn on March 04, 2005
    0_0 (falls over and dies)

    WOW! That was awesome! Malfoy is such a fecking tease! I liked how some of Malfoy's emotions were new to Harry, like the feel of perfection and stuff. Great job!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on March 04, 2005
    Oh I can't wait until chapter 3! Do they send messages back and forth for the rest of the summer? Does Harry take him to the Chamber of Secrets? What happens next?
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