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Reviews for A World Apart

By : Headexplody69
  • From ANON - honey on December 05, 2006
    you better not leave it hanging cuz i love it
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  • From ANON - Morgyn on December 20, 2005
    Hell, I can't even get past the bloody fucking summary before you break the plausibility meter. Don't you even bloody watch SG1? Nevermind, don't answer that, because more than likely the answer is 'not after the end of season eight'. The Goa'uld are STILL a threat, though no longer as even a vaguely cohesive lot. Or did you just conveniently forget Baal even existed? *snorts* Probably did forget the Master of Manipulation. Watch season nine, and then go get s good beta reader who knows both Harry Potter and Stargate SG1 - and no, don't bloody think of me, I wouldn't volunteer to read implausible crap even if you fragging paid me. IF, and I do mightily stress that word, IF you ever get something tolerable, than maybe I might get past the summary. Now, granted, you might have tolerable writing, but I find people who have bad summaries, or show their implausibilities there without an appropriate warning label - AU exists so people know you're fucking with the reality, twit! - so I don't have a hissey like this. Now, go, get a brain, and keep your implausibility from breaking things.

    -Professor Morgyn Merlin
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  • From ANON - Eve on August 10, 2005
    I liked it a lot and am looking forward to future chapters but I would like to see more paragraph seperation. It can be a bit difficult to read with one or two large chuncks of text. It is easy to loose your place. LOL I think it's great that that was my only problem. :D
    Loved it!
    Keep up the good work!!!
    Eve
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  • From ANON - Jewel on March 24, 2005
    hey.. when are you going to update.. i've been waiting forever!
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  • From ANON - Jewel on March 08, 2005
    hmmm.. interesting idea, i need more chapters to decide whether i only like it or love it though!
    update soon, and keep up the good work
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