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By : ktthemighty
  • From ANON - Dominic Shade on March 09, 2005
    Good on ya luv, happy to see you took my advice and such. This is turing out to be a great story, keep up the good work. And how come Dumbldork wouldn't know? That bat usually knows everything? Though I guess it doesn't matter really. I can't wait to see what Snape does when he finds out about Potter, maybe he adopts him? Though that is pretty far-fetched...I guess I'll be leaving it up to you then, lol. Good times and rock on.
    -Dom
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  • From ANON - Eowynselixure on March 09, 2005
    Ayy I like it! Please please please continue!

    *Eowyns elixure
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  • From ANON - not telling on March 09, 2005
    Hey! the story is brilliant:) it's viceless ! Please continue asap cause i can't wait till harry will be saved, and seeing him suffering it makes you want to cry, but you just cant stop reading... Please update asap:)
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  • From ANON - Killergirl on March 09, 2005
    UPDATE SOON OR I WILL KILL YOU
    KIDDING JUST UPDATE SOON WILL YAH???????????????????????

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  • From jazzylady on March 08, 2005
    This is really good! Question: Why wouldn't anyone notice the needle marks on Harry's arms? Does Harry use a concealer spell? Anyways, keep up the great work, and update soon!
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  • From ANON - jeepers on March 07, 2005
    UPDATE
    PLEASE
    EMAIL
    ME
    WHEN
    YOU
    UPDATE
    AND
    YOU
    SHALL
    UPDATE
    OR
    ELSE
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  • From kat701 on March 07, 2005
    Eagerly awaiting more! Absolutely love it! Though would like it if the chapters were a tad longer
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  • From ANON - Dominic Shade on March 07, 2005
    Aw, this is right on hon, I love this sort of writing. The only thing I would have you do is fool around with Harry's actions more. Like many addicts have these twitchy things that they do, or like they can't make their hands stop shaking. And I also think that if Harry had been abused for so long, he'd have his own little quirks, like talking in a child's voice whenever he thought he was in trouble, or having some kind of childish behavior around grown men since he wasn't able to develope into an adult on the account of him being abused.
    Anyway, good on ya and please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Mandy on March 07, 2005
    The story has been fairly well written except for one word - DRUG. In the context given the word should be DRAGGED or DRAG. According to the dictionary DRAG = 1 to haul or pull something or someone along with difficulty; 2 To search a watercourse with grappnels etc; 3 to allow ones tail to trail along the ground; 4 Womens clothing worn by males; whilst DRUG = 1 a medical substance; 2 a narcotic, hallucinogen or stimulent, esp. one causing addiction.

    Sorry but yours was the upteenth story with this bit of bad English and its irritating as it destroys the stories flow.

    Mandy,
    Victoria
    Australia
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  • From ANON - Ru-Shin on March 06, 2005
    Wow. O_O You updated quickly. I just reviewed about 30 minutes ago,I think. XD
    Strangly,I can see Harry playing a guitar.I've never thought about it before,but now I can see it.
    HA! Snape's a sneaky one,he is. XD Going around "observing" the students. XD And I want to say thank you for not making Sev just jump out and stop Harry shooting up. ^^ Him going to Dumbledore with the info seems much more believable. ^^
    Great chap. Update soon! ^^

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  • From ANON - Ru-Shin on March 06, 2005
    Interesting. ^^ I like it so far. I hope you update soon.
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  • From kat701 on March 06, 2005
    Oh yay! Love it! can't wait for more! Poor Harry!
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  • From ANON - antipyro on March 06, 2005
    Nice start, too bad the first chapter was so short. You have a great writing style, easy to understanding and encompassing nice little details. I'll be watching for updates.
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