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Reviews for Where Others Fear to Tread

By : harriet
  • From ANON - Elizabeth Spiegel on May 04, 2005
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
    *deep breath*
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
    *deep breath pant pant* you can't end it there......I HATE CLIFFIES!!!! and they were just getting into it..............

    DAMN IT DAMN IT DAMN IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    MORE DAMN YOU MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - GetOutOfMyHead on May 04, 2005
    FOUR! THERE WAS FOUR! I LOVE YOU! YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH!

    The Harry Potter GOF trailers start in theatres on May 13! Aren't you excited?! I'm almost as excited for the movies as I am for the next book, or the movie itself! I have no life.

    I'M SO HAPPY!
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  • From ANON - antipyro on May 04, 2005
    Marvellous, stunning, spectacular!

    Yes, I'm saddened to have it ending so soon, but this is one of the better stories I've ever read. Your mastery of the details and the little things you put in to make it all sound so real are what brings me back to your writing time and time again.

    BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO!

    Yes, Draco and the remaining details to tie up. I'll have to re-read the first few chapters to see if I can spot any of the missed details.

    Please put me on your list to send me the archive file. This is a keeper!

    Please, make the week a short one to repost.

    Candy and confections and all the sweet sugary stuff to make it a memorable ending. I hope you do have an epilogue, maybe making it into a prequel to the next story you write?????
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  • From ANON - Kumori on May 04, 2005
    i love your story ^.^
    hurry up with another chapter please :D
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  • From foxracerchick129 on May 04, 2005
    YAY! Ooh I LOVE these last couple of chapters, their sweet and funny, just down right cute. Amazing Job. I cant wait to see what happens with the Baby and Draco. As well as hear more on this experimental magic and what else happened that night.

    ** Tons of Chocolate Frogs and Sugar Quills for you and your muse **

    Love it! - Jessica
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  • From ANON - Phoenix 5 on May 04, 2005
    Wow, good chapters. You'r teasing Harry with the chocolate cake in front of him when he is forbiden to eat chocolate and that all of the others are eating something he would like very much. Will you made Harry hve some *envies* like odd meal like many pregnant persons have? I know how it is, I have 3 children.
    I look foreward to read the next chapters Thanks (and I hope my english is not too bad ;-)
    Phoenix 5
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  • From ANON - Lils on May 04, 2005
    finally!

    I wondered, if you got a writers block...but luckily...nope^^

    I really love your story, but just one question..

    Why does Severus call Harry often "Potter".
    I just think, that when they are married, it is a little bit...unpersonal?

    Thanks for your story,
    Lils :)
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  • From ANON - elizabeth on May 02, 2005
    waiting for an update. I have been checking in at all my spare moments. waiting. waiting. waiting.
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  • From ANON - Shadow Bandit on May 01, 2005
    Really enjoying your story. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - NB on May 01, 2005
    I'm enjoying your story very much, but there are a number of things which let it down.

    There is no 'o' in Lucius. 'Death Eater' and 'Dark Lord' are always capitalized. In most cases their should be an apostrophe before the 's' in posessive nouns. eg. The boy's wand. Draco Malfoy could not possibly have been the Dark Lord's play-thing from the age of 10, because the Dark Lord was body-less and without his Death Eaters until until Harry's forth year at Hogwarts.

    *shrugs*

    You need a good beta. And wish you'de get one, because this is a good story.


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  • From ANON - DH on April 30, 2005
    Eh? I like him, is he dead? And why is no one concerned he's dead? *cries for JJ* I actually thought if Sev were gone, Harry would get with JJ and make little JJbean spawn. XD
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  • From ANON - snarkyroxy on April 30, 2005
    Wow. Just wow. I don't think I can find the right words to describe how much I'm loving this story.
    I don't usually read much slash, but I was rec'd this by a friend and I've just spent the last five hours literally glued to the screen. This is brilliant. I've laughed, I've cried, I've screamed, and can I say you write both 'awkward sex' and 'good sex' incredibly well. I can't wait to see what the final twist is! One final note: the person who rec'd this to me is Rebecca, who I believe reviewed earlier today and invited you to post on OWL. As another admin for that site, I'd like to second that invitation and tell you we would be absolutely over the moon to archive your work! http://owl.tauri.org - I do hope you will consider it! Wonderful writing! You've converted me to HPSS for good!
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  • From ANON - labrt2004 on April 30, 2005
    Hi, I just found your story today! This is unbelievable. I am enjoying it immensely. I made myself stop at 14 to review, because I wnted to bash my head into a wall. I felt Harry's disappointment. What a let down! Some way to lose your virginity. I think you have the characterization of both people down pat.

    As a senior beta and administrator for the Online Wizarding Library, I would LOVE to see your work archived with us, too. Please consider it. We're run by an extremely dedicated and enthusiastic staff, and our webmistress has turned the site into something truly staggering. We have an email alert system to notify your readers when your fic is updated, a review alert system to notify you when you have reviews, and a review reply function. There are also scores of other perks available here. Please do come have a look if you have a moment: http://owl.tauri.org

    If you have further questions, please email me!

    Again, I am absolutely enamoured. Now to read some more.

    Rebecca
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  • From ANON - miststalker on April 29, 2005
    well I made it to this one and all I care to say is UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! I love your Harry Potter universe it's great! I want more!!!!! and maybe a sequel or two of wonderful smuttiness? plEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAse
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  • From on April 28, 2005
    AAAWWW ! I reallyliked Severus's brother, but I'm glad Severus wasn't killed.
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