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By : harriet
  • From ANON - Jessy on April 27, 2005
    YOU KILLED JASPER!?!?!? NOOOOO why did Jasper look like Snape? And if Jasper looked like Snape why wasn't Snape there?

    wildfire
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  • From ANON - AyanEva on April 26, 2005
    Excellent story! I've been looking each day to see if chapters 41 and 42 were posted yet! I got to the end of Chapter 41 and damn near had a freakin' heart attack; thanks a lot! That was really evil of you! :-) It took me two days and an aching back from sitting in a hard ass chair to read chapters 1-40 b/c I basically read it straight through, pausing to sleep and eat every now and then. I mean, this is a really, really good story. I kept saying, "OK, one more chapter and I'll go to bed." I'd get to the end of that chapter and say, "OK, just one more and I'm really going to bed this time!" Of course I kept reading.

    I like how the relationship b/w Severus and Harry took some time to develop and you managed to keep everyone in character. The maturation of the characters and their relationships is very believable and logical, unlike some fics I've read that are like, "Severus and Harry hated each other. *one chapter later* Severus and Harry a madly in love w/ each other." It's so gripping b/c for a while there, you're wondering if there's anyway that this marriage is going to work out. But that poor fetus! As if the birthing process isn't hard enough, the little guy/girl's been nearly splinched and whalloped with about 3 different curses. I can't wait until the baby's born just to see how it's made out after all of the jostling. And the baby better be born too! No cruel twists where Harry miscarries or something b/c then I'll have to cry. Seriously. But of course I'll keep reading 'cause I'm a sucker and addicted to this fic.

    I'm sad to see Jasper go, though. I rather liked him. The intimate scenes b/w Harry and Severus are also very well informed, tastefully done (though, I'm not adverse to PWP and fluff on occassion), and very well written. I'm sorry to sound so repetitive, but this is a really good story. It's usually hard to keep my attention for more than 20 chapters but you've managed to keep my attention for all 42 chapters; and I'm waiting eagerly for the 43rd! And now look what you've done: You've kept me up until 2.40 in the morning reading and reviewing; and I rarely ever offer reviews! :-D I'll blame you if I'm sleepy tomorrow. Great job, well done, A Plus, and to top it off, you get a gold star! Really awesome fic.


    AyanEva *bows to the fanfic master*
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on April 25, 2005
    Oh poor Jasper.

    cdk
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  • From FairyPoet on April 25, 2005
    *sigh of relief* Sirus!!! HES ALIVE!!! *sobs uncontrollably*

    Poor Jasper...you must explane how this all came about.

    Magnificent Ch, as alwasy. Damn, you are so talented.
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  • From ANON - jess on April 25, 2005
    yes i knew you wouldnt just leave us in a depressed state like that, lol a professional guesser, that would be an excellent job

    THANK YOU FOR NOT KILLING HIM

    WE LOVE YOU

    jess
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  • From ANON - Angel on April 25, 2005
    Hey! Harrys name is not Harold *hmpf* But I still love your story!
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  • From ANON - JJ on April 25, 2005
    No, NO! Bad dog! No sick puppies allowed here!!!! Great chapter. Sorry I left the state and couldn't keep up. It may have been a quick chapter, but I wasn't expecting Jasper and Snape to switch you sneaky B! I'm glad Harry didn't end up with Jasper in place of Snape. How did the baby get back into Harry? I thought long ago that Harry apparated without the little bugger, but I guess I was wrong. Please write more!!!
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  • From ANON - GetOutOfMyHead on April 25, 2005
    I - am - so - HAPPY!
    And sad though. I loved Jasper, he was great!
    I'm not mad at you anymore, though. You're allowed to be in my posse.
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  • From ANON - Eowynselixure on April 25, 2005
    I NEW it!!! I knew you wouldn't let Sev die!!! Question- why didn't sev come up and tell Harry he hadnt died? If he was Jasper? Anyway PLEASE update soon!

    *Eowyns elixure
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  • From lightgoddess on April 25, 2005
    Squeeeee! You updated!! *sniffles* I can't believe you killed Jasper! I've read quite a few stories where Snape had a brother, and Jasper was by far the best written one I've seen...and you killed him! Waaaa! LOL! Seriously, though, what's up with the no chocolate rule? Can't wait for the next installment!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 25, 2005
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 25, 2005
    I swear I'm not reading any more of your stories till they're completed. *grumble* *grumble*

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    Okay, I probably will...

    Only because I can't help myself. *sigh*
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  • From ANON - mac on April 25, 2005
    You're a bit twisted yourself!!! :) I nearly screamed after chapter 41, that was just wrong! But I kind of guessed Jasper and Severus switched so I was relieved in 42 when Sev was still alive. Poor Jasper, I liked him... :(
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  • From ANON - nerak on April 25, 2005
    right... maybe it's not really sev who survived? (in which case regrettably, i would have to murder you in your sleep). and no mention of remus or sirius who should be camping by harry's bedside... maybe harry's kid lost an arm or leg during the bad example of apparation? i feel very bad for jasper; i liked him a lot... but better him than sev, sorry. more? *puppy eyes*
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  • From ANON - Ima on April 25, 2005
    Yay! Love it!
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