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Reviews for Where Others Fear to Tread

By : harriet
  • From ANON - Debs on March 24, 2011
    fab story! i love it!
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  • From Fleetzz90 on March 24, 2011
    The story is good but the quality of the writing (grammar, word usage, etc.) is poor. The author is either not a native English speaker or is in 4th grade. Words like loose and lose, where and were, your and you're are consistently used incorrectly. Would greatly benefit from a beta. I came to this story from a link from painless_j's list, but were I her, I would remove it.

    The story desperately needs editing.
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  • From jujukitty on February 06, 2011
    don't know if you'll ever see this, but amazing story! great depth of emotions and i love your spin on things. wonderful job :)
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  • From ANON - theladykt on January 23, 2011
    was a nice story. thanks for taking the time to write.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 15, 2011
    Completely WONDERFUL - thank you so much!!! I'm sad that Draco had to die - but you wrote it fantastically. One of the BEST Snape/Harry pieces I have EVER read (and I have read thousands!!). Thanks!!
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  • From MissChriss on February 14, 2010
    Wow that was a great fic. I loved it. Poor Draco, I feel really bad for him he had no choice but to be the bad guy. I hate him and feel sorry for him at the same time. You are really great at characterization, I got a good feel of all of the main characters. I like the baby's name Alexander James. I also like how Snape is still Snape. I read a lot of fics where all of a sudden Snape is all nice and kind and it's all a mask. Here Snape was still his sarcastic, cranky, demanding, cynical self.
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  • From mandee78d on November 09, 2009
    OMG... I totally didn't see that coming! You're like
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on November 05, 2009
    A truly wonderfully written story. It had a nice mix of emotions. Love the way you wrote out the characters. This was a really enjoyable read that I had to finish it in one sitting
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  • From ANON - AngelMary89 on November 03, 2009
    Great chapter. Had fun visualizing as I read about the new position. I even like the way that you situated Harry's pregnancy. No over the top, just right. Even in explanation.
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  • From ANON - AngelMary89 on November 01, 2009
    Great job so far. I like what I've read even though its a common background story. The personality and the description of the story is very well done.

    Lovely, read so far.
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  • From ANON - MirzeSnape on July 21, 2009
    awww, how cute, maybe u should have made Harry have a 2 years old daughter in there! that would have been adrouble!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 14, 2009
    Alas, I was really prepared to read this story. I found the link to it from a "Bonding Fics" list while following links from Snarry Digest at Insane Journal.

    I have to agree with so many of your other reviewers.

    From the first two chapters, your plotting and characteristation are very strong, but your grammar and spelling is absolutely horrid. If you would take a little more time with your writing and get a strong beta, you could really grow and improve your writing.

    It is extremely rare for me to stop reading a story once I've started. As it is, I'm going to have to consider this story 'the one that got away'. Or at least not read it unless I'm so desperately bored that I'm willing to pour salt into open wounds for entertainment value.

    This story is obviously very old, so one could hope that your writing has grown over time, but as a courtesy to your readers you might either a) warn that the spelling and grammatical errors are so extensive or b) remove the story until you've had a chance to revise it with a beta.

    Or, of course, leave it as is and be satisfied with the mediocre result of what could probably be a very excellent story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 02, 2009
    WHAT?! HArry forgave him that quicklY?! Just bc you say you love soemeone doesnt let you off the hooK!!! HE enjoyed it with Draco! He Shoudl be punished!!!! >:( You let him off hte hook too quickly!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 02, 2009
    ooh! Snape's a fucker!! I hate him for causing poor harry somuch pain (this is for the ONLY YOURS chapter) GRR!!! And That wanker Malfoy too! Fuck them both! Harry should castrate them both!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Em on May 25, 2009
    This story was absolutely fantastic! I loved every word, thank you very much for posting :)
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