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Reviews for Where Others Fear to Tread

By : harriet
  • From ANON - Lumcer on November 27, 2008
    I loved this story. It took three days with my hectic schedual to finish it but it was so worth it. A personal Thank you for finishing your story. Have a Happy Thanksgiving!

    KCK-Lumcer

    P.S. I would seriously consider going back over it and revising it though. there were quite a few missing words, miss spelled words, and some words that were suppose to spell something else. Again a great story.
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  • From ANON - Fate-Angel on October 09, 2008
    Oh, WOW, that was amazing! Really wonderful story. I started it yesterday and just couldn't stop reading. If only all the stories on this site were as well done as yours.
    Thank you for sharing!

    =^-^=
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 30, 2008
    If you made up a lie and told people that you were French or German or Greek, people might be more forgiving about the fact that you drive them up the wall with mistakes that are more age appropriate for an 8 year old than for someone who is writing fiction about homosexual relationships.

    Decent enough story, but partway through ch 22, I just gave up on it due to the spelling and errors. The story doesn't seem to be written by a grade school child. The relationships are well described, and the story seems well plotted enough (at least for the first half), and I'd forgive the spelling if this was written on voice recognition software by someone who is quadriplegic. However, any 8 or 9 year old child would be able to improve this story by proofreading the non-sex scenes. I can't possibly correct the whole thing, and the author specifically has said that she doesn't give a shit about spelling or errors, that this is just for fun. However, to give potential readers an idea of what's going on:

    ch 2. Ron and Hermione nodded, the red haired girl having put aside her book in favor of the conversation between her friends. [Ginny is not in the room with them, and Hermione does not have red hair]

    ch 2. Admittedly he
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  • From spikesbitch on September 12, 2008
    a beautiful story. i loved snapes confession of love to harry on the quiditch field as the reason why he seemed less affected by the bond. i also loved the character of jasper a truely fitting brother to snape. the gun was also a welcome addition as magic so often dominates as a way to defend. the epilog was fab too, especially snapes reaction to the little bare bottom. i'm glad i found this story.
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  • From ANON - Leniece on June 30, 2008
    Really amazing story. The best that i've read in a while. I'm off now to read some more of your story.
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  • From ANON - n on June 14, 2008
    good story, but you need a beta, or a better one if you have one. Misspellings and odd slang were distracting.
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  • From ANON - Raa on May 20, 2008
    loving it so far. just one thing though. i thought maybe where snape asks if harry would have said "yes" if he'd simply asked that harry could maybe have said something like "we'll never know now." or something of the like. cos it makes leading on to a relationship sound a little less like harry would rather die than go there.
    Raa
    xxx
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  • From greycat on April 27, 2008
    Very much enjoyed your story! I liked how you added muggle weapons in there too, the knife and the gun. Most authors only use magic in hp fanfiction but the combination of the two in your story made it more interesting. Thanks for writing!
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  • From GeminiSoul on April 26, 2008
    Great story..now time to go read another one!

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  • From ANON - Patrick on February 04, 2008
    I thought for sure that Sev would use his family crest tattoo to kill Draco. I'd forgotten about the alternative way to kill him.
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  • From ANON - Ash on February 02, 2008
    Great story! Well written, nice and long. I really enjoy reading your stories.
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  • From YaoiPerv on February 01, 2008
    Wow...That was very good! I really liked how you kept all the characters in character....Anywho, fantastic job! Keep it up! -Jasper
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  • From ANON - Solomon on December 24, 2007
    GREAT STORY ONE OF THE BEST
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  • From ANON - Solomon on December 24, 2007
    HELL NAW I might as well not read anymore now that we know snapes gone his brother will hold onto Harry and the baby
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  • From quitedemented on November 12, 2007
    Well done! I have read many forced bonding fics but this has to rank high on my favorites list. I like how Harry fought the bond so hard at first and how it took awhile before they really got along it made it more interesting. I thought I had read this before but after reading the first chapter I realized it was one of your other stories I was remembering. I will have to scan you other stories to see which I haven't read because I quite enjoy your work. Keep writing because you do it well!
    Cheers,
    QD
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