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By : harriet
  • From ANON - shadow on June 15, 2005
    it's a good story. it's interesting and i like it. But please try to place your words nicely make sure there's no wrong spell words in a sentence it will throw off the original meaning of that entire sentence. I see it in some of your chapters. had to re-read the sentences to get what u trying to said. Some i don't even understand it so i just guess what you trying to tell us the reader. Anyways, it's a good piece. keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Lizzie on June 01, 2005
    Okay, I just read 50 chapters inside of 5 straight hours so excuse some nonsensical statements here ^.^

    I absolutely loved this. It's great to see a Snarry fic whose plot line strays from Poor&Abused! Harry or I've-hated-him-for-5/6/7-years-but-now-I-realize-that-I've-really-had-a-crush-on-him-all-this-time! Harry. Your first chapter was a little confusing at first but, of course, I figured it out (go me!)

    And I must admit that I was a little weary about starting a 50 chapter fic, as a lot of authors tend to start to just drag things out for the hell of it after 20 or so but I'm really glad that I kept reading-you did a great job at putting the twists and turns through the fic, instead of all in the first 5 chapters ^.^

    Great job!! ^.^

    xoxox,
    Liz
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  • From ANON - xikum on May 30, 2005
    Ch. 41 I really love this fic, and thoroughly agree that your characters are true to canon form in their behaviour. The story is nicely complex, with a very interesting variety of plotlines. However, it would be much better if you would get a beta to correct the spelling and grammar errors, and fix the places where the wrong word was used---English has so many words that are spelled similarly but have utterly different meanings. Having a few typos is just fine, everyone makes them and they don't detract from the story, but beyond a certain point... At any rate, the story is interesting enough that even with the typos, I am glad this fic is published and out here for us to read...it is still decidedly better than many!
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  • From ANON - xikum on May 30, 2005
    Wow. That's still sad regarding Draco, but it totally fits withhis both being spoiled and abused---and into power, due to his powerlessness given what his own father sold him into. I would have hoped he would have listened to Severus---just because he could not have Sev, and Harry did, he returned to Voldie and sold Severus out, who had done what he could to help him for all his life?!?! All I could see in his defense, is that he could not be mentally sound, he must be irrationally imbalanced, given how he has grown up. But it is too sad...
    And Harry---That was quite the nasty, cutting thing to say to Severus---He called Severus to task for what he did, and rightly so, but he also owes Severus quite an apology, for saying such horrid things to him, just because he was angry and moody from the pregnancy is no excuse for such cutting, destructive statement to Severus. He truly does owe Severus an apology, esp. since Sev gave him one for what he'd done!
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  • From ANON - xikum on May 30, 2005
    Ch 17 Poor Harry---Severus isn't being honest with him. Wonder what's up with that. Some type of slave thing? Or did Draco do it, just get a tattoo, and Sev is unaware? But that seems just too unlikely. And I have to wonder about who Draco is gonig to---Voldie, as a sex slave?
    Or was he picked as a 'suitable mate' for another DE? I can't imagine, though, with Lucius' ego, that he would allow Draco to go to anyone with less standing, and the only one with more than Malfoy Sr. would be Voldie himself. And, since Severus has given Draco his word to protect him if he came to him, then why does Draco continue to go? Doesn't trust Severus' ability to shield him, or protecting Severus? I am so glad that this fic is already done and I will have the answers as soon as I can get around to reading more---this feels like such a wonderful luxury!
    I have to say that I think you have their characters ' behaviour donw pat, so true to canon if this type of thing could ever be allowed to happen in mainstream fic---you have portrayed it very well!
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  • From ANON - dragon34 on May 27, 2005
    I loved the ending. In my opinion, the longer the story, the better. I loved reading your story, and a fitting end to Draco. He seemed like he was indestructable, Harry proved that he wasn't.
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  • From ANON - Panda on May 25, 2005
    Hey Babe,
    Couldn't help myself, but I loved the story so much that I've copyed it all and book binded it.
    New intallation, need new installation.
    Truthally babe you are quite a great writer. You should go in professionally.

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  • From ANON - silverdragonz_z on May 16, 2005
    Beautiful.
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  • From ANON - Kat on May 15, 2005
    I loved the ending as well as the whole story. When I thought Snape had actually died back in earlier chapters I actually cried, as corny as I sound I did. It probably didn't help that I had Sarah Maclaughlin's song "I will remember you" on repeat throughout the whole chapter but it was beautiful nonetheless. Extraordinary and beautifully written (typed) story, looking forward to more of you fics. It's very rare that I read long stories like these, but I was drawn to it from the first chapter and there were only 40 or so chapters at the time. Again, I have to say that I loved the foreshadowing and the way you kept the story interesting and funny! Hope to see more of your fics.

    Kat (truly devoted fan now)
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  • From ANON - Lioncourt on May 15, 2005
    And you know, I loved Draco in this fic. (Though I don't blame you for killing him, hell I wanted him dead too.) His life must have been a pure hell. God I hate Lucius! Selling his OWN SON as a PLAYTHING for TOM FUCKING RIDDLE. I wish I could strangle him with my bare hands. Seeing how Draco was around Snape, and then seeing how he turned out in the end; horrible. I wish I could give him a hug, though he would probably hex my ass if I did.
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  • From ANON - Lioncourt on May 15, 2005
    Well done! You are so creative and imaginative. Your muse has to be fucking unbelievable! All those intriguing suprises that keep popping up along the way really keeps you on edge. Lovely! The two scenes I like the most are Harry's and Sev's first 'real' kiss and when Sevvie 'dies'(fuck, you scared me on that one!). Though, I think that if I hadn't started reading this when it was already completed I would have gone crazy; cause sometimes the chappies are just a bit too short. All in all, I think it is brilliant. I could hardly tear myself away from the computor until I had finished reading it.
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  • From ANON - Colene Creevey on May 15, 2005
    Whoohoo, this fic is hereby placed in my "favourite fics"-folder under Favourites ^.^

    Here, have a "Chocolate Covered Snape" for your great work. ^_^
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  • From TheDarkBeginning on May 15, 2005
    Awwww that was so sweet. That was one of the best Harry/Snape fanfics that I've read....although in the beginning I was doubtful, but you turned it from Angsty to a very beautiful story. I have to say thank you before I forget, I really enjoyed this, it managed to drag me away from the real world for a while....now I guess it's time I get back to it.

    A very lovely story, thanks again.

    Elizabeth
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  • From ANON - R.C. on May 15, 2005
    omg can't believe it's the end...i love this story ... Alex is sooo cute lol....i wonder how does he looks like...write more good stories for us readers

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  • From ANON - Kat on May 14, 2005
    I've finally made it to chapter 32!!! Yay for me! I've grown attached to this story and I love the foreshadowing throughout the story. (Plus I like the fact that there are far fewer misspellings compared to other stories I've read!) Great work!
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