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Reviews for Flesh of My Flesh

By : lashton
  • From monkeyshines on May 16, 2007
    i've checked out your livejournal and you haven't updated there either and im wonderin if you're ever gonna finish this fic. i'm dying to know what gonna happen next. i've been waiting forever. anyway i just wanted to know since i dont know your e-mail address.
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  • From ANON - Miny Mo on November 14, 2006
    You have to continue this story! It's too good to pass up. Don't abandon it.
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  • From ANON - JJ on December 19, 2005
    This is so intricate and complex, and fascinating!!! You have created a publishable story centering on Draco. Please continue it!!!!
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  • From ANON - Rose on December 11, 2005
    You must write more! This story rox!
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  • From ANON - LestatsAngel on October 23, 2005
    oh yeah and please e-mail me when you update if you don't mind ^_^
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  • From ANON - LestatsAngel on October 23, 2005
    truly an awsome story lol i couldn't even stop reading this once i started. please update this story soon or you may have driven this porr author mad :) hehe well i love how thisis going and i hope harry and draco are actually able to be together and i sooooooooooooooooooooooooo want lusious to die for what he did evil devil agre you have me compleatly and utterly addicted to this story congratulations lol no one had managed to do this so you are an awsome writer and i pray that you update soon :) toodles!
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  • From ANON - Buenos Noches on October 21, 2005
    Um...Really when reading this I thought it was not so greatly put together. Did u not read over it yourself at least? Draco went through many character mood swings as did his dad and many others with no explanation. Why didn't the guy just stay at the place and do it there? I mean it was mostly empty, wat was the point of going all the way to that place just to pick up a few potions? He coulda gotten the potions before and just slipped them into his drink. Also why was Draco stupid enough to drink an odd drink from two people he didn't know well and was obviously suspicious of? How is it that Draco was suddenly sober enough to know what was going on with his father after taking 3! different drugs? Why would that guy go to Draco's home of all places when Lucius is definitely someone to fear? And the drastic switch of moods after the rape was really odd. And why did Dumbledore and the like seem to know what was going on? ANd wats all this talk of manipulations in the summary. The way things went after it would almost seem like Lucius was the poor perverted bastard you should pity. Ah well I have only read a bit and I guess I will read on but the rushed unexplained feeling of the story is something you should try to fix. I suppose you did say it was unbeta-d just so u know you really could use one. I could help out a bit if you need it.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on October 19, 2005
    I'm beginning to wonder if Harry shouldn't just back off or better yet give up. Continue to be his friend. It looks like Draco doesn't really have any feelings for Harry nor will he ever. *sigh* I hope I'm wrong. Can't wait for chapter 12L!
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  • From ANON - Amessis on October 19, 2005
    Loved it once again! I love the way you write the developing relationship between the boys. Can't wait for the dance.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on October 19, 2005
    I'm not sure if Harry and Draco's relationship is healthy or not. I like how Harry wants to take care of him and the twins. Speaking of twins... they formed a bond with Harry thinking he is their other father. Wow! Can't wait for chapter 11k!
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  • From ANON - Amessis on October 19, 2005
    Wow, what happened there? Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - angel on September 21, 2005
    man ... i love it please more more ...please update soon and in till next time keep up the great work and later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - crystal on September 21, 2005
    Wow, amazing writing so far~ @__@ I'd definitely want to see more of this. I really love the draco here too, hopefully the twins will be fine? Although i wonder about lucius' reaction to this... Please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - NightShade on September 21, 2005
    Interesting, original, well written - I love this story, I hope you will update soon.
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  • From ANON - Shannon on September 21, 2005
    Please keep up the good work, I am anxious to read more!
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