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Reviews for Lily Potter and the Time Traveler

By : BethPee
  • From ANON - Elizabeth S on May 02, 2005
    Oh wow, bum bum bum bum, that was good, needed more in the Harry/ Lily scene but it was still good.....more please?
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  • From ANON - Branwen on March 23, 2005
    I like the whole lily/harry pairing it is really cool.
    please continue writing
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  • From ANON - a on March 22, 2005
    wow. realism would have been nice. though i'm sure every mother fantasizes about having sex with her son cause apparently women have completely uncontrollable urges of the most revolting type involving everyone possible.
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  • From ANON - Elizabeth Spiegel on March 22, 2005
    Much better, not a lot more written.....but a lot more accomplished!

    I'm proud, so I will not release your address to the public...yet.....bu-ut


    I WANT MORE CHAPPIES SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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  • From ANON - Robbie Byrd on March 21, 2005
    I liked how you have Harry & Lily getting together. I can't wait to find out what will happen on their date in Hoggsmeade.
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  • From ANON - anon on March 21, 2005
    I think Snape should encourage their relationship.
    It would be extremely kinky.
    In a good way.
    Of course.
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  • From ANON - Jillian on March 19, 2005
    You leave us waiting that long.. then you dont even write much.. that was a total disapointment..
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  • From ANON - Jeff on March 19, 2005
    This is gonna get seriously weird and I can't wait to see what happens.

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  • From ANON - Robbie Byrd on March 19, 2005
    I liked how you have Hermione suspect something. And I also liked where Lily & Harry kiss.
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  • From ANON - SlytherinsWench on March 19, 2005
    That has the potential for major *squeee*. I can't wait. :)
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  • From ANON - ME!!! on March 19, 2005
    EVIL EVIL CLIFFIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL

    I WILL GET YOU FOR THIS ONE THOUGH!!!!

    YOU JUST UPDATED THAT LITTLE TID BIT SO NO ONE HUNTED YOU DOWN AND MADE YOU DO IT DIDN'T YOU.....

    I WANT A LONGER CHAPTER OR I'LL TELL EVERYONE WHERE YOU LIVE!!!

    I KNOW WHERE YOU LIVE!

    I KNOW WHERE YOU SLEEP!

    I KNOW WHERE YOU HIDE YOUR MANGA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jillian on March 17, 2005
    MAKE MORE GAD DAMN IT!! really, its a really good story, so make more soon.
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  • From ANON - Dorian on March 12, 2005
    So good so far.
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  • From ANON - Jillian on March 11, 2005
    wow.. u have got to make more or I will be forced to do unspeakable things..
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  • From ANON - Robbie Byrd on March 11, 2005
    I enjoyed reading your story. I liked how you introduced Lily to Harry.
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