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Reviews for Malfoy\'s Mate

By : anonnomore
  • From ANON - Kat on March 24, 2005
    Really great story so far, you need to update and quick!
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  • From ANON - Susanna on March 24, 2005
    OMG!!! This HAS to be the best story on the entire site!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait until you update the story!!!!!
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  • From ANON - anon on March 23, 2005
    Veela do NOT have wings. Yes their faces turn birdlike when angry but they don't turn into birds and they don't have wings. It was VERY hard to determine what was the characters speaking and what was just action since your quotation marks only make randome appearances. Your sentance structure leaves much to be desired. Your plot is so full of holes it rivals swiss cheese and nothing makes any sense. Just thought I woudl let you know.
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  • From ANON - Eddie on March 22, 2005
    twisted but very good. keep writing.
    Much Love
    Eddie
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  • From ANON - of no importance on March 22, 2005
    Whoa that was intence i so can't wait till you update this story.
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  • From ANON - LaLa on March 21, 2005
    And Feel Better!
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  • From ANON - LaLa on March 21, 2005
    You are a GODDESS for updating so soon. I LOVED this chapter. You are by all means a SMUT QUEEN of fiction. Please continue soon. I can't wait to see what happens next. Oh PLEASE make Draco jelouse of someone for looking at HIS Hermione. I want him jelouse and possessive...it gets me hot and heavy!

    I know it will be too good to be true if you update in the next few days...but PLEASE do. I am on my knees here...
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  • From ANON - Static Wolf on March 21, 2005
    Wow! I am in awe of your writing skill! Did you by chance have refrences to the Veela stuff or is that your version of the Veela? I CAN'T wait for the next chapters!!!! Is this going to be a long story? I REALLY hope so because I just LOVE your story. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I LOOOOVE THIS STORY!!! I am a HUGE fan!!!! ^_^
    ~Static Wolf
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  • From ANON - jessie on March 21, 2005
    I love the whole Snape/Poppy thing
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  • From ANON - Kill Bill on March 21, 2005
    Malfoys going to school, I can't wait, I hope Hermione
    get's in trouble with Draco or they could actually have
    a nice night with romance instead of rough sex. Please
    at least have one loving sex scene, the rest let be rough
    I don't care. Also update because when stories are good,
    they need to be updated fast. Thank you so much for a
    a dominating male, I do like that way as you know.

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  • From ANON - raven on March 21, 2005
    Interesting twist-still borderline rape but you pulled it back in the end. Couple questions-Dumbledore was suppost to spell the castle to keep people from seeing-how does the AT remain out of that? I could have sworn the students would be essentially locked into their tower and all openings sealed...since they were able to see everything, I would like there to be some sort of consequence for this invasion of privacy.

    Second, considering how protective the veela are of their mate, especially with other men, how does this bit of exibitionism not conflict with that jealousy? If they can't even stand someone's smell on her, or someone looking/standing near her, how can they allow so many people to see them mate for the first time? Is this an accepted part of the ceremony, Draco's bit of exibitionism, or something else? This aspect, more than anything else made this scene seem like something out of a gang rape story from Asia that you find in the paper now and again. I just can't reconcile this protectionism/exibitionism with what you have written thus far in this story, let alone what we know of canon veelas.
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  • From ANON - slyswn on March 21, 2005
    Every good author is a little twisted.

    Mmm another yummy chapter.

    Poppy and Sev are hysterical

    MOre! More!
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  • From ANON - LadyMalfoy730 on March 20, 2005
    Wow, this is amazing! I really like it alot and the scenes with Draco and Hermione are absolutely wonderful!! You have a great imagination and are a wonderful writer! Update soon!!
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  • From brainfear on March 20, 2005
    Crazy crazy. More please. heh.

    ch4
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  • From ANON - anon2all on March 20, 2005
    hey, i think you should really continue to write, cause i'm kinda hooked on this story, and its really nifty, so kudos to you!
    anon2all
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