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By : anonnomore
  • From ANON - Kill Bill on March 20, 2005
    Please go on, I can't wait till the bonding comes on. Um, one
    thing, are you serious that there would be a crowd watching, thats
    a little nasty. Update soon, it's going to kill me if you don't.
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  • From ANON - LaLa on March 20, 2005
    NOT ENOUGH!!! I wish you wrote a little more. I wanted to know how Draco was prepaired...maybe you should have included him and his father in a conversation or something. I totally and unconditionally love your fic. VERY TWISTED. When you mention the wings on Sev, I thought that maybe he was another form of Veels or something. Hmm, Sev and Poppy...interesting. Please write a longer chapter next time. I've been waitning for it almost the whole week and when it finally arive...it just wasn't enough.

    PLEASE continue soon.

    Ps. I do hope Either Fred, George, Ron or Harry will be caught watching the ceremony, resulting in Draco hurting them...not killing them. Please post another chapter in the next few days. I am BEGGING here.
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  • From ANON - slyswn on March 20, 2005
    My my what a yummy story . Haven't read such a yummy story in awhile. love it , it's so delicious and that's putting it lightly. More more!
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  • From ANON - Jess on March 20, 2005
    That's some pretty twisted sh*t. What's with all the raping?
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  • From ANON - blah on March 18, 2005
    omg this chapter was so good.
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  • From ANON - courtney on March 18, 2005
    more more more... i wanna read more
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  • From ANON - Rosalind on March 18, 2005
    Intense! I really like Draco as a Veela. He has the look and the demeanor for one. Now if he were just a bit older say thirtyish... oh well I guess we'll never know.. Good writing.
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  • From ANON - Dracomione on March 18, 2005
    Please update soon! This is fucing great story and I can't wait untill you update.
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  • From ANON - Kill Bill on March 15, 2005
    I've acutally had a free week excpet for work on the weekend, but
    sorry for my behavior of reviewing poeple about updating. I bassically
    have become glued to Adult FanFiction this week since there isn't anything
    else to do. I mean my friends are all plaining parties and have invited me,
    which was only on the weekend, so I'm just sitting like a good little girl
    reading about many things you can't get in the books in school except if
    you were studyingthe anicent part of Greek art work, that's a whole other
    story, so please if your one of those two day updaters, come I;m waiting.
    Sorry I'm being mean again, oh god someone get me off this thing, well
    anyways I hope your having a nice week. Good job on the story, love it!
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  • From ANON - LadyMalfoy730 on March 15, 2005
    I really like this. Wow, If i could draw I would draw what you described Draco looking like. he sounds wonderful. Update soon! I hope there are more than one chapter left!!! Email me when you do... Maureen@remcom.net
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  • From ANON - LaLa on March 15, 2005
    WOW! You have a REALLY twisted mind...I LIKE IT!!! OMG! Draco is bigger than 12 inches??? Shish! No wonder Hermione is damaged internally. And his mother...as much as it makes me sick to know that a mother would be comfortable enough to her her son's privates... I really liked it too.

    I can't believe that our hot-headed Hermione is a poppet in this fic. Continue soon. Don't even think of giving up this story. I LOVE DRACO VEELA. All possessive and jelouse and protective. I also liked how you actually changed him phisically...the wings and the claws.

    Ps. I am not sure what he said to Lucius. Is he not his father???
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  • From ANON - dragons girls on March 15, 2005
    WOW! This story is sooo different from the ones i have read. I LOVE IT.

    DRACO is so mean though. He is cruel. Hope u can at least show some compasion to hermione.
    other than that. THIS STORY IS GREAT! love it....... update soon.

    Are u almost done with this story? ^ _ ^'
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  • From ANON - Jess on March 14, 2005
    I don't like the fact that Hermione has no control over stuff. The Veela relationship isn't supposed to be like that, where one controls the other. And he keeps hurting her, if he truly loved her he would stop and do what's best for her, not continually abuse her.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 14, 2005
    I like it. Continue please.
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  • From ANON - Latricia on March 13, 2005
    NO WAY! ARE YOU SERIOUS? MORE THAN 12" ONLY IN STORIES. I HAVE TO ADMIT, IT WAS SURPRISINGLY GRAPHIC, BUT I LIKE IT. I LIKE THIS SIDE OF DRACO (PROTECTIVE I MEAN LOL) BUT WHAT I AM CURIOUS ABOUT IS THE FACT THAT THEY WERE STUCK TOGETHER. HOW COULD YOU GET STUCK? I HAVE ONE FINAL QUESTION: WAS MADAM POMPFREY IN THE ROOM WHEN DRACO GREW CLAWS, RIPPED OFF HER ROBE AND BEGAN TO HAVE HIS WAY WITH HER? I GUESS NOT BUT YOU SEEM NOT TO MENTION HER ANYMORE.

    P.S. I THINK IT WAS KIND OF CREEPY TO HAVE NARCISSA WATCHING THEM; I UNDERSTAND THAT SHE WOULDN'T TRUST DRACO TO BE ALONE WITH HER BECAUSE THEY WOULD BE STUCK FOR 3 (3 UNDERLINED 16 TIMES) DAYS BUT COME ON YOU GOT TO ADMIT IT WAS CREEPY. HAVING SOMEONE WATCH YOU WHILE YOU ARE DOING SOMETHING SO INTIMATE. WELL I GUESS YOU WOULD FEEL ANY TENSION OR A BIT WEIRD ABOUT IT BECAUSE YOU WROTE IT

    PLEASE CONTINUE. I HAVE KEPT UP WITH THIS STORY SINCE IT CAME ON ABOUT 2 DAYS AGO. AND I HAVE TO ADMIT, I WOULD OF NEVER CAME UP WITH THIS IDEA. HOW DO YOU COME WITH THESE THINGS?

    ANYWAY I AM TAKING UP YOUR TIME, SO I BETTER STOP BEFORE I KEEP WRITING ABOUT EVERY LINE THAT I FOUND ASTOUNDED.

    WELL GOODNITE HAVE PLEASE CONTINUE
    10:55 P.M.

    BAHAMA BABE
    BAYBEETRICIA
    AKA
    LATRICIA

    THIS IS TRICIA SIGNING OFF.
    (I ALWAYS WANTED TO SAY THAT IN A REVIEW LOL)
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