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Reviews for Malfoy\'s Mate

By : anonnomore
  • From ANON - Kill Bill on March 13, 2005
    I see you've gotten better at the over powering Draco.
    Oh god he seems really hot, but give a better descipition
    of himself, so others can get the full view. Maybe he was
    a little harsh with Hermione because she is always playing
    the innocent one. How about you put Ron and Harry trying
    to see Hermione or a possiblilty of one of them stepping in
    on the mating pair that night while in bed. That would well at
    least I think will be good, then the action does start. Please
    update maybe tomorrow because this is killing me. And oh
    please take my advice. This is sometimes how much I write
    for reviews, so bare with me.
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  • From ANON - Jessica Hayes on March 13, 2005
    this is awesome so far
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  • From ANON - nicky on March 13, 2005
    I like it! very...um...interesting! are there more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 13, 2005
    I love this story and can't wait for you to update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jess on March 13, 2005
    It's interesting so far and you've explained a good deal. I'd like to know more about Hermione's reaction, when she's not being ordered around or clouded by lust. Also I'm curious about that school she went to. A school for concubines? Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - 2005 on March 12, 2005
    its really good kep it up
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  • From ANON - lala on March 12, 2005
    Hi,

    Wow, I am SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO glad that someone else decided to do another Veela fiction. I CRAVE them. PLEASE continue soon. PLEASE!!!!

    Two thumbs up!

    Ps. Poor Hermione...if she wouldn't of agreed you might as well as made this a rape chapter. Aw! Anal sex is NOT fun.
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  • From ANON - becca on March 12, 2005
    omg. i love it. make him really possessive. oh gawd, veela draco is fucking hawt.
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  • From ANON - anijade on March 12, 2005
    Interesting concept but Veelas are supposed to show immense affection for their mates not abuse them
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  • From ANON - dragons girl on March 12, 2005
    I love this story, so much! Update soon! ^ _ ^

    I agree with "KILL BILL" the other reviewer. Make Draco more passionate and romantic.
    another than that. I LOVE THIS STORY.
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  • From ANON - Dreamer on March 12, 2005
    Wow! Very Hot!
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  • From ANON - Kill Bill on March 12, 2005
    Me, likey, likey, please oh dear god go on. Also just something
    to say, try to explain the sex scene better and make Draco even
    more possesive because I like my men just that way.
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  • From ANON - Krys on March 11, 2005
    Very good start, hot story! I love a Veela Draco! :) Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - blah on March 11, 2005
    omg.........this is such a good story so far!!! please write more!!!!!
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