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Reviews for Malfoy\'s Mate

By : anonnomore
  • From dracofollower0208 on November 16, 2020

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  • From ANON - ella on October 13, 2012
    I love this story! You're a great writer!!
    Please update ;)
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  • From StarrCrystal on December 24, 2011
    I really REALLY wish this would be updated but...*sigh* oh well I guess
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  • From StarrCrystal on June 09, 2011
    I highly doubt you will continue with this story but I just like to say that this story had me at the edge of my seat the entire time. The part that I must say is my absolute favorite would have to be the parts with Snape and Pomphrey. I just want to know what she saw when she when she walked in on him and what does he suppose to be? But anyway, even though this story may never be finished I would just like to say that this story is very well written and that you are a very good writer.
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  • From arienishi on July 19, 2010
    :0
    thats all i can say.
    i was kinda weirded out
    but read in none the less :)
    sodomy (not really my cup of tea)
    But what ever
    there is a reason this is adult fan fiction
    i like the fact that you made draco twisted "Little Bastard"
    It works for him and prefer it in his character to a mushy, bend over backwards pile of veela goop
    hate when they make him too pussy whipped.
    as or the watchers?
    pervs
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  • From Cissi418 on May 23, 2010
    This has got to be the best start of a veela story I've ever read!! Extreme disappointed you chose not to finish it though, ugh!!
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  • From mlui on April 16, 2009
    I really like the story and I hope you'll continue it someday. I really wasn't expecting Severus and Poppy together though... I especially liked how Draco and the Veela were separate and then became one again. =)
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  • From MythDouglas on July 23, 2008
    I liked a lot, interesting and in depth lore for the Veela. I do have a question about Draco's gift of "honored promises." Does that mean she has to keep her previous promise to obey him? That would conflict with her never conceding her free will, so I don't understand how that would work. If Draco had Hermione as his slave lacking the ability to challenge him, that would take away what he loves about her. The fact she is strong willed, independent, intelligent, stubborn and bossy. I am interested to see how her summer lessons come into play and who paid for it. It will be sad if and when the conflict with Harry and Ron relationship with Hermione causes jealousy within Draco. It is weird how Draco/Veela is almost a new person or character, it isn't really doesn't feel like Draco anymore. Whether or not that is what you wanted to do I don't know. I like the subplot with Severus it kind of lightens things a bit.

    -Witch Myth
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on January 17, 2008
    RE: chapters one through four

    Oh my God, this story is so twistedly, sexy as hell...I love it! It is more original than a lot of the tripe that is being offered by the majority of the writers. Isn't that sad?

    This story has such potential:
    1) VEELA!Draco & Hermione
    2) BAT!Snape & Poppy
    3) Harry & Ginny
    4) Fred & Angelina
    5) George & Katie

    All the pervs present to "witness" her mating ritual with Draco..."All of her professors, Narcissa, Lucius, Arthur, Charlie, and Bill Weasley as well as several other people she did not know were present." Let's not forget those that had gathered upon the Astronomy Tower (pay per view) to see the ritual: 4th years & up (if they paid Fred & George that is): Fred, George, Ron, Ginny Weasley; Harry, Neville, Crabbe, Pansy, etc.

    Please write more, or at least give us the addy of where else you have this story posted, with additional chapters, so that we may get our fix of tastey smut, and fantastic plotlines.

    ;~D
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  • From butterfly22503 on May 18, 2007
    i really like this fic and hope that someday you continue it

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  • From skydancer on February 28, 2007
    wow, that was one of the more lusty veela matings I have read! ( thats a good thing!)
    I do hope that eventually you'll decide to finish it though.... the wings sound like a great plot bunny rampage!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on November 27, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Nikkuman on October 14, 2006
    This has got to be my favorite story here. I've read it and read it over countless times, but am too lazy to comment...until now
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  • From ANON - ????? on October 14, 2006
    um...........ewwww why would u have an audience? if ur doing something intimate do it privately!!!!!!!! and poppy and snape????eww!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 30, 2006
    Totally wicked.
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