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Reviews for Eleven O\'clock...As Always

By : lizzieweasley
  • From ANON - Anon on June 12, 2005
    Ap
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  • From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on June 05, 2005
    This is way sexxy!
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  • From ANON - Seph on May 26, 2005
    Criticism? How could anyone possibly find something wrong with this? The dialouge was hot and intimate, I could almost hear the passion dripping in their voices. The description was great, and very detailed, I had no problem invisioning it (great imagery :D). The actual interaction was very hot, very passionate, very arousing. I was also pleasantly surprised to see that your grammar and spelling was nearly impeccable (something that is usually a turnoff for me when it's not present). Not only it this a great fic, but also one of the best F/F fics I've ever read, if not the absolute best fic I've ever read. If you would expand to write longer stories setting up the actual act, I'd be dedicated to reading every last splendid word you type. Fantastic, I loved it, and I will hunt you down if you don't publish more. :D Just kidding.

    Keep up the great work!
    Seph
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  • From ANON - me on May 04, 2005
    And just 2 tell you im so horny right now write another i love your work but as you probaly know ihav other things 2 take care of right now : )
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  • From ANON - me on May 04, 2005
    I .love your story AMAZEING!
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  • From scwolf10k on April 14, 2005
    *fans self* oh my goodness! This was HOT! Good work!
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  • From ANON - Someone on April 05, 2005
    My God, you have made me so fucking horny! That was a very good story, especially as your first NC-17 and F/F!!!! Well done!
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  • From ANON - Firehunter on March 22, 2005
    Great story you should do another chapter
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  • From on March 20, 2005
    That was a first attempt? Damn, im impressed. let me just say though, that i hate you, cause now im horny, and i have no one to fuck. thank you very much. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - vance_emmeline on March 18, 2005
    Hello!

    I absolutely love this. I can't believe that this is your first femslash, as it is wonderful. Also, their sex was so erotic. It was different from the usual oral sex, and I was sweating just reading about it. The twist at the end was great, they are a naughty, naughty couple!

    Thanks for the great piece of writing, and peace!

    Love, me.
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