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By : sappysappysappy
  • From ANON - jen on March 26, 2005
    Your story is wondeful. Why don't you publish at ashwinder ?
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  • From ANON - lilyvalley100 on March 25, 2005
    Interesting premise. I look forward to reading your take on their new relationship. Please let it be a slow progression. Your interpretation of the characters lead me to believe that it will take them a while to even see each other as friends.
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  • From ANON - Cenicineta on March 24, 2005
    So, he knew, just was playing dumb for his convenience. Such smart people!! Lovely story. Hope to read more soon.
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  • From ANON - Kliodna on March 24, 2005
    Hello!
    I enjoy your story so far, please continue!

    I have to say that the name of the greek book is completely wrong, the translation is a bit confusing. If I understand well your book is like "offerings to the green mother" is that what devotion means? In that case the greek tittle should be "afieroseis stin prasini mitera" or in greek "
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  • From ANON - mysticsong1978 on March 23, 2005
    Great story.

    Feel like I missed something at the end --- she knows why Snape is there but he doesn't know why she is there so the order to meet him tomorrow seems a bit out of place.
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  • From ANON - Gannet on March 23, 2005
    An auspicious beginning... I'm looking forward to the update!
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  • From ANON - Miki on March 23, 2005
    Snape's quick realization is wonderful. Hermione didn't know what hit her. Very nicely done. (BTW I believe it is Minoan). I am keeping an eye out for your updates.


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  • From ANON - Lady Jade on March 22, 2005
    Oh cool! I was wondering what reasons people would have for hermionie to agree to this. You've come up with a good one. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Maela on March 22, 2005
    Interesting start. I was skeptical in how you would get each of them to agree to this, but you've pulled off a plausible explanation. Update soon! :)
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  • From ANON - azalea on March 22, 2005
    Hi, 'Teletourgiko Prasines Arthro Mana' does not make any sense at all. It would translate as : Ritual green (
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  • From ANON - southern_witch_69 on March 22, 2005
    another great chapter. I was wondering what would cause Hermione to agree to having a little one for Snape. This does work well. I could see Hermione trying to better her magic, and in the process, she'll undoubtedly fall in love with the idea of really being a mum. :) I can't wait for more. Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Miari on March 22, 2005
    I am SO glad you posted this so quickly:) I loved it and eagerly await the next installment, especially since I get sneak peeks *happy beta bouces around the room*
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on March 22, 2005
    I am really intrigued by the book and the rituals needing to be fulfilled. I think this would appeal to Snape to make his son's knowledge of the magical world a bit more towards the pure-blooded aspect. I am sure a child with Hermione's intellegence would not be a turn off either! Does the magical world have artificial insemenation? OR will they have to do it the old fashioned way??
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  • From ANON - KarenDetroit on March 22, 2005
    This is NIFTY! And you are not sappy, dear. I love the McGuffin--it's perfect!
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  • From ANON - cocoachristy on March 22, 2005
    Very interesting reason for wanting to be a surrogate. Very creative!!! Hope the next chapter is up soon!
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