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Reviews for Leaving a Mark

By : sappysappysappy
  • From ANON - azulkan2 on March 22, 2005
    Oh my I liked this chapter even more. Can't wait to see what the ritual is. More soon please.
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  • From ANON - June W on March 22, 2005
    Ch 2 - wow, that's a great explanation for why Hermione would become a surrogate! Umm, I am assuming that the pregnancy involves sex - that it's just Muggles who make babies by test-tube combination of egg and sperm? Are her parents alive? It sounds like the baby has to be a boy, so they would need a potion or something to handle that. He needs to tell her that he wants complete privacy, but since she has already told the Weasleys (and therefore everyone) that she is going to be a surrogate, she's going to have to hide from her friends until the baby's birth? 'Cuz if her friends see her pregnant and with Snape, well, there goes his privacy. Thanks for the chapter! Looking forward to the next.
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  • From ANON - Kristy on March 22, 2005
    nice start to the story. I like how you've skipped over (or delayed) the usual drama associated with this type of story. good luck with it.
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  • From ANON - GinnyW on March 17, 2005
    I think that it's a promising start to a story. I have a chapter written for this same challenge...I'm thankful to see that it's different... I actually like this challenge, I think that there is some potential for a good story with it. ~Ginny
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  • From ANON - Lady Jade on March 17, 2005
    This looks like it will be a good story. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - southern_witch_69 on March 17, 2005
    yay! glad to see someone taking up this challenge. good start.
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  • From ANON - ~Rhiannon on March 17, 2005
    This is intriguing and seems quite promising! Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - abbi cee on March 17, 2005
    LOL! I love the start you have here. Will Snape get a lot of strange responses or any at all? What would bring Hermione to consider it? I can't wait to see where you go with this.
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  • From ANON - cocoachristy on March 16, 2005
    And so it begins!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for chapter 2!!!!!
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on March 16, 2005
    Oh boy, really like the sound of this one. Can't wait for more. Soon please.
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  • From ANON - lilly on March 16, 2005
    I like it but I can not imagine Hermione being willing to have a baby for money. An intersting story I like it please continue.
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  • From ANON - June W on March 16, 2005
    Ch 1 - excellent beginning! I'm glad he's not in danger of going to Azkaban, but sorry he's not recognized for his war efforts. No Order of Merlin? "Succulent Vulcan" - what a name! I hope you update regularly and soon!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on March 16, 2005
    Very funny start. But for pete's sake below the age of 75? That's too funny.
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  • From slygriff21 on March 16, 2005
    Interesting start! I like it! I hope you will be updating soon.

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Bambu on March 16, 2005
    I snickered as I read this opening chatper. Certain phrases, 'procuring a mother,' and when calculating the final product were simply very, very funny. I can so easily see Severus Snape evaluating his situation in such a fashion. I'll look forward to your next update.
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