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Reviews for Mindlessness

By : ChibiKakarotto
  • From ANON - Bobcat on July 30, 2006
    its CUTE, dont let anyone else tell you otherwise, this is like HELLA old, but i'm quirky like that, you wanna write anymore, i can help you beta stuff or just for an outside opinion, well, ttfn, byee!^-^
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  • From ANON - animelover476 on July 19, 2005
    i thought it was really good! I've read worst believe me and yours was definently one of the better ones so good job!
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  • From ANON - stacey on May 14, 2005
    It wasn't as bad as you made it out to be. I loved it, the P.O.V.'s could have been longer or more in depth, and you needed some with Harry's thoughts. It was really good though; the suspense built up, the sex scene was good(not as graphic as some but not as pointless as many). This critisism is only to help if you write another, which i hope you do. Remember if you think you suck chances are more people think it's great, and the more you write the better you'll get. Keep writing you seem like a natural.
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  • From ANON - Jo\' on March 27, 2005
    Wow! Turn up the air conditioning!
    And don't sell your self short; that was great.
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  • From ANON - DarkGoddessoftheRoses15 on March 27, 2005
    This was great. Remus/Harry...that is one of my favorite pairings. The older, more experienced possesive werewolf with a young innocent...just so tasty! ^.^
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  • From ANON - Jessyka on March 21, 2005
    wow. great story. can't wait for more

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  • From ANON - Angel of Immortality on March 18, 2005
    I wouldn't say that it was horrible. In a way it was quite cute. Odd, but defininetly cute. Are you going to write another story? You should (if only so that I can enjoy reading it.) Good luck with whatever you decide to do. Angel Sere
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