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Reviews for Flame of Existence

By : Arabella
  • From ANON - Anon on March 27, 2005
    wow- this story is great! The character of Snape is believable, and so is Hermione as a rape victim. It's a real treat to read such well crafted fiction! Keep it it up:)
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  • From ANON - Lu Ling Qi on March 26, 2005
    You SUCK! and by YOU SUCK! I mean i hat cliffs you always get so close and then you are about to fall over and that dam saftery line (end of update) is alwaays there to hold you back. I find this story to be superb and i wish for more updates whenevr you can.
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  • From ANON - Eddie The Black Maru on March 26, 2005
    *scratches at monitor* It was getting VVVEERRRYYY good. bad writer! no clifies....they make the readers cry! Anyways, this story is really picking up speed. Now the headmaster had been put intp play. How will the detention go? Will Harry and Snape ever find out what really happened to Hermoine? Will the slimy ferret get whats coming to him? I await your update with baited breath.
    Much Love
    Eddie
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  • From ANON - divine angel on March 25, 2005
    Chapter 2 was great. I can't wait for 3 and her detention! You write a difficult subject with great tact and sensitivity too, well done.
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  • From ANON - forge on March 25, 2005
    your fic is amazing! it's very well structured and written and the story line is also great! please please PLEASE continue writing for i'm terribly hooked and need to know what happens!!!
    thank you and later days
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  • From ANON - TaintedAngel on March 25, 2005
    Hey Bella!!
    Loving the story hunny!! I cant wait to see where this goes!! I think you have captured an abused persons character correctly.

    (In) Patiently awaitng the next chapter :-)

    TaintedAngel xxx
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  • From ANON - WriterLady1031 on March 24, 2005
    Hey, I'd like to read more of this. Just as I was getting real good into the story, there was no more to read! I hope that you continue with this one.
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  • From ANON - Dawn on March 24, 2005
    Please update soon. I really like this story. You are a great writer I can't wait for you update. I think hermoine should curse Draco bad.
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  • From ANON - lilly on March 24, 2005

    Continue Please cotinue. It is a great story. Angt and all. I can not wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - June on March 23, 2005
    Ch 3 - as long as you eventually get Draco "taken care of," I'll be happy! He canNOT get away with rape. Hmm, maybe Severus can sneak in and listen to her talk in her nightmares. I hate the idea of her doing patrols by herself, with no one to help protect her if Draco finds her.
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  • From ANON - Innogen on March 23, 2005
    This is a great start; I really like the long chapters. Please update as soon as possible!
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  • From ANON - Joey on March 23, 2005
    I do love the story, I really do. However, there is something I wish to point out. Overall, your grammar and spelling is pretty decent, and mistakes are minimal. On occasion, though, you do have a mistake or two, such as typing in a wrong letter ["find" instead of "fine"] or leaving out part of the quotation marks. I reccomend you either run over your chapters to catch the small mistakes like that, or get a beta to do it for you. Often you need to wait a day before you proofread, because you will be seeing what you think you wrote instead of what is really there. Like I said, they are very minimal mistakes, and a small amount of fine-tweaking would get rid of them and make it all better. Great story, I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - cupotrevor on March 23, 2005
    amazing story looking forward to updates!!
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  • From ANON - Lu Ling Qi on March 23, 2005
    Well you are setting it up nice but it is excruiciatining
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  • From ANON - Dragon-Malfoy on March 22, 2005
    Please continue. I cried so much when I read this chapter. I loved the way you made Hermione slightly dark, and when she told Snape off. Please bring some into this story.
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