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Reviews for Flame of Existence

By : Arabella
  • From ANON - maddy on May 15, 2005
    Hi,
    uhm, when will you update again?
    I think the story is really progressing now and I must say I like it very much.
    Please update soon so I can let my nerves rest a bit. (grins and winks at you)

    I'll wait patiently....

    Hugs Maddy
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on May 14, 2005
    Awww, that silly Hermione!

    Please update soon!
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  • From meegwun on May 13, 2005
    i was so excited when i went to the hermione/snape page and your story was near the top! i've been anxiously awaiting an update. :) please keep writing, i am not ashamed to say i am a bit addicted.
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  • From LadySnape on May 13, 2005
    Aside from the somewhat disjointed thought flow (may want to find a beta, not sure if you already have one or not), I think this is actually a good segway(sp?). The confusing thoughts that Hermione would have about her behaviour seem expected I think as well as the behaviour of "throwing herself at" Snape, her "saviour". I think that self esteem and self worth play greatly in how a person would view themselves as well as those around them in recovering from a rape, the feeling of helplessness lowering both of those in respect to how a person views themself. Good work, I am looking forward to seeing how this will work itself out, rape is a difficult issue to work with and around.
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  • From ANON - asmus on May 13, 2005
    Brilliant story. I hope you update soon. It's terrible to leave it like that.
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  • From ANON - JJ on May 13, 2005
    Excellent story! I truly dislike rape sequences, but your was more implied than explicit. More impoprtantly, the developing relationship between Herm. and Snape is definitely worth it!!!! This chapter was heartbreaking. So Herm. is having nightmares about Snape - great plot device. Now Snape has to regain ground he didn't even know he'd lost. You handled the Harry incident nicely: explaining much without making him out to be an idiot. How is Snape going to court Herm? Or is he going to back-off again now that she's pulling back? Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon ;-)
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  • From ANON - Susan on May 13, 2005
    I am still so glad you are not rushing this. I feel so bad for Hermione and your portrayal of her seems very real. Hopefully, Snape will step up again soon and help her. Well written and well thought out. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - sarah on May 12, 2005
    i hate cliff hangers! hurry up and post soon. ~laterz~
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  • From ANON - betty on May 11, 2005
    Fuck me, this is a great story. Read it all in one sitting. Keep up the good work. Only please keep Hermione depressed, it pairs her well with Snape's reluctant hero.
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  • From ANON - Eddie The Black Maru on May 09, 2005
    WAHHH!!!! that was SOO very awesome! I wonder when our little Malfoy will come back and play and what game will he be playing. I liked the chappie you showed him a softer light, I guess even ferrets are human (lol) but I wonder where you will go with it. you've got me.
    Much Love
    Eddie
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  • From ANON - ShilohDarke on May 07, 2005
    MAN!!! I am hooked!!! PLEASE update soon, as I am going to go mad waitint to read what happens next! Good for Hermione! I hope she just lets him have a good dose of Affection! He's in desperate need of it!
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  • From meegwun on May 07, 2005
    Oh! How wonderful! You've made the transition to love so believable. I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on May 07, 2005
    Hermione smiled.
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  • From ANON - bellasol67 on May 07, 2005
    Your story is quite intense...I like how Ron is popular with the ladies! Poor Harry, I'm guessing he kissed Hermione because he doesn't know what else to do.
    What a nice little cliffhanger you left us with...what will Draco do? Poor Snape, torn between what he wants and what is proper. Hermione had to make the first move, but I would imagine that she would be a little bit more reserved considering what had happened to her...but hey, it's your story and I'm only along for the ride. Hope you update soon and keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Shadowknight on May 04, 2005
    Excellent work you've done. Dark and moody, yet full of hope. Well done, and I await chapter 10 with baited breath. Few typos, and grammar works well. All in all, a piece of excellent storytelling.
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