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Reviews for Flame of Existence

By : Arabella
  • From ANON - forge_underhill on May 01, 2005
    Once again a great chapter!!! Go you!!! Loving the evil cliffhanger and the fact that Harry's getting a bit pissed off at Ron. Quite saddened by the small amount of Snape you had there, so hoping there will be more in the next chapter!!!! Nobody seems to want to update here, so hope the new chapterwill arive soon! Once aagain go YOU!!!
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  • From ANON - mysticsong on April 30, 2005
    Oh man! What a cliffie!!

    I hope he doesnt get "burned" again. :o)
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  • From ANON - mysticsong on April 30, 2005
    I love this:

    Draco stopped short and turned around to stare at his head-of-house.
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on April 30, 2005
    Ah Hell! Too funny! Will Snape respond or will he push her off and give her the "I don't touch students" lecture?? Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - neko_chan on April 30, 2005
    nice im liking this story a lot! keep it up its good to know you update often ^_^ cant wait till the next chapter
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  • From ANON - JJ on April 30, 2005
    Actually I'm glad Draco can't kill. I'd like to think, as a child/young adult, that it would be beyond him. I'm also glad the Harry DOES care about Herm. I was worried that he was acting so out of character. I just hope its not too late for him to repair his relationship with Herm. Herm. is still telling Snape off? Brass balls if you ask me. Will it motivate him to stop thinking of her as a child, I wonder? I appreciate that she's still thinking about letting it all go. Once damage is done, it doesn't just go away that fast. Your character is being a little more realistic than most in her situation. I'm still rooting for Snape and Herm. to figure it all out together! Thanks for continuing the story!
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on April 30, 2005
    Oh man! You have got to update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kathryne on April 29, 2005
    Can't wait for the next chapter. XD Damn Cliff Hangers
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  • From ANON - Lu Ling QI on April 29, 2005
    Wonderful! Wonderful! i absolutly love it and i love the direction it is taking, keep up the good work and update soon!
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  • From ANON - JJ on April 25, 2005
    Interesting and inviting. Snape, in character, but acting more human. So he wants to give Herm. what Draco couldn't? I'd like to see that! How does Dumbledore know what happens in his school? How could Ron and Harry be so blind? To go from the hero of the wizarding world to a shit? That parting shot - a true slitherin, a coward - was awesome! Dumbledore playing matchmaker? Been there, done that, and still want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm enjoying your story very much. Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Jenn on April 25, 2005
    Oh....more...more....more!!!! lol I am so glad Draco got kicked out! About time! Can't think that's the end of him though. I can't wait til the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Monkmess on April 25, 2005
    I'm really enjoying your story. You don't seem to be pushing the story line much and I like that. Please keep it up, I can't wait to read more!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 24, 2005
    AAAAAHHHHHHHHH.........update soon! ~Joani
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on April 24, 2005
    Yay, Draco is outta there!

    You know i find it amusing that this stuff happens all the time....two people liking each other, but the other one not knowing, and both of them are too scared to admit it!

    Brilliant chapter and i look forward to the next update!
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  • From ANON - Susan on April 20, 2005
    I have lately avoided reading Hermione-rape-stories for the simple fact that things seem to resolve too quickly. That said, I think you are doing a marvelous job with this fiction. I like the trade-off of Snape's inner musings along with Hermione's. Their self-doubt is like having them looking a mirror...except not that trite. I really look forward to more and I hope that shit Malfoy really gets it.
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