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Reviews for Forced Bonding

By : ladyblaze2511
  • From IGGY on March 27, 2005
    Well I think this story is wonderful. Don't let one dumb reviewer get you down. There are just some very childish people out there. I really don't see the problem with your grammer either, but hey that could just be me. I really like the story so far, I really see this going somewhere. I love story where Harry and Draco have to bond. This story is really good so far, keep writing. Update soon!! I want more...lol

    Bye,
    Pamela^_^
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  • From on March 27, 2005
    ??? don't be discourage by those flames, ^^; i think it's a great story and people seem to like reading it, hell, you got more than 60 reviews from 5 chapters and majority of the stories here in AFF haven't even got half of reviews this story has and they even have more chapters. =.=; the one who flamed you is either just a jealous bitch! (sorry for the language) or just a person who has nothing to do with their pathetic life. *gives cookie* i hope you feel better...and update this soon ^___________________^
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  • From ANON - CrAzEe_E_GrEen on March 26, 2005
    I have to make this a quickie, but, nice little set up. I wonder what this chess game will bring out..and as for the mean person, forget them, remember the fans that do appreciate you! keep writing!

    e.green
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  • From ANON - ash on March 26, 2005
    I think your story is really good so far, and I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Larimar on March 26, 2005
    Great story. Don't let anyone stop you! I love that you regularly update, and I can certainly live with the very small amount of grammer mistakes. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Acacia on March 26, 2005
    The person who left such a horrible review is the one who is immature. It is sad that someone would waste energy just to hurt another. I can't wait to see how you've planned the ceremony!
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  • From ANON - orangeblossem on March 26, 2005
    To ladyblaze, I know exactly the way you feel I have a story at fanfic.net and after my fifth chapter my beta sent me an incredibly horrible e-mail. I felt horrible since it was my first fanfic,
    However I mentioned it in my story and the next thing I knew I got a ton of supportive reviews. So don't worry I am really enjoying your story and looking forward to the next chapter. Some people just like to try and hurt people and get them down. Keep working at it your storytelling will improve with every word you write. Also just letting you know I'm 21 and know when I'm reading a good story and this is a good story. Orangeblossem.
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  • From ANON - Shay on March 26, 2005
    Well the review That wrote that review is obviously very stupid cause i think that your story rocks! I love it and She is retarded and obviously doesn't read very many stories!
    xox shay xox
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  • From ANON - Zentiis on March 26, 2005
    i like it! its got a nice feel to it, i look forward to the next update! great work!
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  • From ANON - Sakya on March 26, 2005
    Hei, let's talk about reviews.

    I am a fanfic writer, I got couple ones out there, I'm not the best one and my grammar could use some improving and also, I am... well, far from 12 years old, but for all that counts I LIKE YOUR FIC and just for the record NO WAY IN HELL I PITY YOU.

    So, ok, maybe you don't use the words I would use and maybe you just don't construct your fic the way I do mine, SO WHAT? It is YOUR fic and the important thing is that you are writing. It's you expressing your idea and it's great! Botton line: Don't let one review you got from someone with more personal problems than personality put you down.

    Oh, and btw just in case you were serious about getting someone to review the grammar for you: the only reason I don't offer myself to do it is because my grammar sucks big time.

    Now that I said all that... when do we get an up date? : )
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  • From ANON - moi on March 26, 2005
    ok... i feel the need to defend your fic. fan fic whore. that's a nice name, huh? (note the sarcasm) well, they should know that your reviewers do not pity you. if i thought your writing was shit, believe me, i would DEFINATELY tell you. i'm not that nice. and i would also like to state that i am definately NOT 12 years old. you're right, if there is a 12 year old reading this, they should stop now. when i was 12 i didn't even know what fanfiction was, let alone go reading R or NC-17 stuff. i think that reviewer was rude and it was uncalled for. if they don't like the story then click the back button. that's what it's there for, dumbass. please don't let one reviewer ruin your day. just think about all the people *cough*me*cough* that love your story. evreyday when i get online i come here to see if you've updated one of your stories. so please, please ignore this jackass. has it ever occured to you, what a story that they wrote would be like? seems to me that fanfic whore is too scared to leave a signed review. well she can just piss off.
    ok, i just had to say that. flamers erk me.
    i love this story, and think that it is progressing beautifully. maybe we'll get some action soon? *winkwink* glad that the boys got a day off, we get to the juice part sooner! update soon, can't wait for more!
    wow... i just realised that i went on a rant... i'll shutup now.
    ~moi
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  • From ANON - Praxitelenes on March 26, 2005
    Okay, first of all, though your story premise isn't original, it has a lot of good elements that I haven't read before. I was really ecstatic when Dobby's speech was 97% correct; too many writers make him use 'I' and 'you' when house elves don't (good job!). I really enjoy reading this story, and you aren't a bad writer; I've seen some horrible writers (trust me). You could use improvement on spelling and grammar, but so far, you're doing good. Just ignore those ridiculous flames. I'd pose the challenge of asking them if THEY could do better. It takes guts to put your work out there. Keep it up! Update ASAP!
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  • From ANON - mechee on March 26, 2005
    i will check your grammer for you. There are just a few mistakes but it isn't anything that is too bad. It looks like you may have pushed the wrong button when typing everyone does that so dont worry. I know after you have typed and read and re-read a story of your own you get tired and may not realise small mistakes but i think you are doing a wonder ful job please dont let anyone tell you different I am not 12 and have not been for a long time, I enjoy your story and i will be reading the other one you have also Please Keep going for your fans that love your writting dont let one sorry ass person ruin things for you. If you ever need any help I sure will give it to you just e-mail me ok
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  • From ANON - ladynight on March 26, 2005
    I don't usally review, i know i'm lazy but i just read your recent chapter. I want to tell you to ignore that girl, you are writing a fine story and i'm enjoying it a lot keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - miku on March 26, 2005
    Please get another chapter up soon, pease!!! it was a peasure to read!
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