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Reviews for Forced Bonding

By : ladyblaze2511
  • From ANON - lilywood on April 05, 2005
    I love this story!! This chapter was great. You are doing an excellent job! Please post more soon.
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  • From ANON - prncssmanda on April 04, 2005
    Oh that was a lovely battle scene, well as lovley as a battle can get, but I say don't rewrite it!
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  • From ANON - Phoenix Black on April 04, 2005
    Kind of a bittersweet chapter. I want to cry because of Lucius.. i actually got attached to your version of him. But then i want to do a happy dance because that piece of [bad word] is finally dead!
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  • From ANON - CrAzEe_E_GrEeN on April 04, 2005
    I really liked this chapter, the battle scene could have been better, yes, but i really dont mind. im not too into battle scene unless they're on tv.they get me confused, my mind can't comprehend it. i am sooo happy more chapters! i was scared it was gonna be over!

    e.green.
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  • From ANON - sallie on April 03, 2005
    Good chapter. Voldy is dead and Draco and Harry care about eachother!
    COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!
    To bad about Luscious really...
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  • From ANON - smurf on April 03, 2005
    Im happy to hear it's far from over:D. The battle scene was really good but I would've gone a bit more into detail with it. *shrugs* no matter, it was still a really good chapter and there's no reason for you to be nervous!!!

    *hugs author* thanks for updating!!!
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  • From ANON - dedmun on April 03, 2005
    the fight scene wasn't bad. could maybe stand a little input from the teachers and the deatheaters, or at least voldemort telling his deatheaters not to interfere or some such, but overall not a bad one. keep up the great writing, and can't wait to find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - moi on April 03, 2005
    this chappie was good, and the battle scene was fine. you pulled it off beautifully. i loved how draco was al worried. and i liked how harry couldn't exactly remember anything. it was realistic and you have no reason to be nervous about it. this chapter answered some of my questions about the bond. maybe theyll both be able to do what they want, now!
    in response to you question about dom/sub relations:
    that quote, and your analysis of it is for the most part right. i am the submissive one in my relationship. and yes, i do trust my boyfriend. the power is an illusion. the truth is, that he knows if he did something that i truly didn't want him to do, he'd be on his back saying 'uncle' in 3 seconds flat... yeah... i can be a little rough for a girl sometimes. if i didn't truly WANT to be the submissive, he wouldn't hold any power over me, simply because i wouldn't let him. and the fact that i can't picure myself on top of anyone with a whip. the idea of me controlling someone, versus someone comtrolling me during... intimate times... kinda grosses me out. i duno why, i guess i'm just programmed that way. and for all the people that thing dom/seb relationships are 'wrong' or 'gross' or 'unethical'... well, you can kiss my lily-white ass.
    i hope that answered some of your questions.
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  • From ANON - QueenlyKing on April 03, 2005
    I really don't think this (Chap !!) was your best. Don't get me wrong, I really enjoyed the holding hands, the shopping, the head pain, that was all great. But you lost me when Voldie came along. It didn't really make sence to me and it didn't seem approprete. I think you be better off revising this chapter and holding off on Harry and Draco confronting Tommy for a few more chapters. Get in the Bathtube and the Lapdance scene first.*eyes filled with yearning* I understand that this was your first atempt at a battle scene so I won't hold it against you. In the future will we get a Dark Harry, no pressure, but I do wonder.
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  • From ANON - amethyst on April 03, 2005
    hello
    I am not 12- ams 23. i really like the idea of the story. i think that while the being force together might have accelerated there willingess to be intimate,. i think the confrontatiion was rush. partialy buase i would have like more of the story. is there any was you could see to making this an mpreg due to the strength of the bonding? think it should be harry that has the baby.
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  • From NekoTenshi on April 03, 2005
    The battle scene is good actually. The entire chapter was interesting too. It's cool how they were taken to Hogsmede and then got to walk away from the other for a while. There was a good use of descriptions from each POV too about the battle scene which was cool. Keep up the good work. Update soon? Please?
    ~Neko~
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  • From ANON - janet on April 03, 2005
    No....dont rewrite it. I think that it is great and very interesting even thought the fight between harry and vodi could be more detailed but it is ok for me!
    But it is sure is sad that lucius have to die as hey he finally turned good!
    But overall i say that this is great update soon

    bye
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  • From ANON - CrAzEe_E_GrEeN on April 03, 2005
    THANK YOOOUUU! i was a little sad last night becuase there wasnt a new chapter (i might have read it during the day before work i dont know i cant remember...) but i so love draco on top. thank you thank you thank you! OH! and you so have to do a bath scene. i love them. such a good chapter! i have a question, do you know how far your taking this story? like, how many more chapters. i hope its a good length, i just like to read your story. did i mention thank you? ^_^

    e.green
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  • From ANON - sallie on April 02, 2005

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  • From ANON - darknessmiko on April 02, 2005
    Why don't you have Draco do that lapdance for Harry for Christmas or his birthday...What about shagging in a teachers' room or classroom...had anyone mentioned that? Yeah, and I think that everyone agrees with the bathroom thingy...XD

    Laika de Lioncourt...always and forever Darknessmiko
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