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Reviews for Forced Bonding

By : ladyblaze2511
  • From lizkrohn on January 31, 2021

    Why did you stop there? The prophecy repeats the first line at the end. Does that mean that HP has to destroy two Dark Lords?

    Is it a co-incidence that AD was involved with bringing both Grindlewald and Riddle to power or where they a smoke screen?

    Grindlewald had the wand, AD put him in prison and took the wand. (GGwas the last of his line!)

    Riddle had the ring. AD tried to defeat him and failed (TMR was the last of his line) and then set up the Potters (who had the cloak). HP (the last of his line too!) survived to defeat Riddle. If AD had survived in canon, what would he have done to get the cloak from HP?


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  • From gossipgirl84 on February 05, 2013
    This was okay. A lot of bad grammar. What really bothered me though was the adults treating Harry and draco like children. It always bugs me when people have Harry and Draco obeying their every rule and having to tell them everything. I just can stand it, they didn't get a moment of peace because Dumbledore, Narcissa and Remus were all up in their faces. They should have realized that Harry and Draco didn't need to be babyed anymore they were pretty much adults themselves.
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  • From skywraith2 on January 25, 2012
    well i don't know what that person thought but i think you write a good story, a bit on the short side i admit but all the same great.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 18, 2009
    Calamite: prehistoric plant like tree: a plant that grew in the Paleozoic era, related to the horsetail.

    Catamite: young partner of gay man: a boy kept by a man for sexual intercourse (literary).

    Look up words before you just decide to just use them.
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  • From Solomon on October 19, 2007
    I am sorry about the bad review This is a good story that promises to get better In a magic world with witches, elves veelas wizards etc there is no homosexuality it simply does not exist and magical people/ creatures can have babys keep up the good work
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  • From Lilith69 on October 11, 2007
    I can tell you this...I have just read the 4th chapter and I am not a 12 year old (like our beloved "fan fic whore")...not that there is anything wrong with 12 year olds ;)..but I enjoy your story thus far and if I stop enjoying it I will stop reading it. People who feel the need to berate writers that don't strike the fancy need a hobby, badly. Your story is realistic, for it's setting and nothing tops the spontinaity of "real life". well done.
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  • From Dezra on August 23, 2007
    Damn, I thought there might be a happy ending. Damn Dumbledore, what the hell is he up to?
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  • From greenleafivy on August 16, 2007
    I think this story is fantastic...just found it and read it all in one day. I think you should definitely put Sirius's portrait where his mum used to be...poetic justice, don't you think? I am a new writer...haven't submitted here at aff before but have written one story in the lord of the rings rps realm. I hope you continue on with this story...I am really enjoying it...and don't be so hard on yourself about the grammer and stuff...the story itself shines through that anyway! Good luck with everything!!
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  • From Sannah on August 14, 2007
    This story is soo adorable! I was sad when Lucius(sp?) died, just when he was growing a set and defying Voldemort. And I almost swallowed my tongue when Draco reverted back to the malfoy mask. I was really worried there for a moment, but it all turned out right in the end. And Dumbledore being able to take their magic anytime he want? That is probably why he was asking so many questions before they left, cause he wants to wait until the right time to siphon the magic. And I would have you know that your grammer is 10 times better than a good majority of the fanfic I read. I mean, these are stories written for the entertainment of the writer and the reader both. How much pleasure can one get from writing if you're constanly worried about grammer and such? And why would someone want to read a story where the person sounds like they are anal retentive, obsessing over the smallest grammer point? I prefer it when the story sounds natural, and your story is a well written example of this.
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  • From Gaia173 on August 13, 2007
    hey, about the dom/sub thing, well i read somewhere that the sub basically has all the power. the dom has the illusion of power but for the most part if the sub says "stop" (and actually means it), then everything stops. i have never been in such a relathionship myself but i do find the dynamics interesting. i might be wrong of course (just because it has never happened yet doesn't mean it can't), but it makes sense that the sub leads the relationship (just in a subtle way).
    Gaia
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  • From Gaia173 on August 13, 2007
    hey, i just your a/n at the beginning and i would like to say that i am not twelve, i know quite a bit about fanfiction, and i do not pity you. that said, i like the premise for your story, it's simple and interesting. im also kinda glad its not another creature fic. i mean i LOVE creature fics (you know, Draco finds out he is a Veela, and must mate with Harry or die) but it can get a little overdone. so, dont listen to stupid flamers that hate themselves and decide to take it out on more talented authors than themselves.
    good luck with your writing,
    Gaia
    p.s. updates are your friend
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  • From Silkylove on August 09, 2007
    Yes to siruis picture! that would be awsome! man i dunno what to think about Dumbledore and the bond, would make sense why he wanted the boys to stay at the castle. Hmm... loving the story :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 07, 2007
    I know it has been a while since that person wrote that horrible review, but i just started reading your story and i love it. That person should take a chill pill and realize that you are doing this for no reason, and are not getting anything out of this. If this were your job I would have no problem with some constructive critisim, however, their review was very harsh and unfounded. I am sorry on their behalf.
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  • From ZooArmy on August 01, 2007
    Hihi! I finally found time to read the last nine chapters. Gods, you shocked me so much when Draco suddenly decided to play an idiot. *sigh* fortunately it went over quickly. *phew*.
    I hope you'll update soon.
    I like your story and agree with you a lot about flamers - 'if you don't like- don't read.' it's their own fault so.
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  • From Sheree on July 30, 2007
    I like the idea of putting Sirius' portrait up where Mrs. Black's used to be. Maybe he and Lucius can get into some good arguments. They can visit each other's pictures. They would be really funny.
    After reading the last few chapters it is my conclusion that Draco is getting a little too dominate. :) Don't take this as a flame because it's not but I love domHarry/subDraco or for them to alternate and it seems to me that if the bond recognizes Harry as the dominate Draco wouldn't be topping so much. Just for the sake of argument (I've been reading some of the reviews) I disagree with the ones who think that Harry would be submissive or more willing to be submissive. He's been downtrodden by the Dursleys the majority of his life and has Dumbledore constantly making decisions about him without consulting him so I think he would be less likely relinquish control over his body to someone else. Also, even though you've made Lucius a more loving father than he is normally portrayed (he's very cold in the books too)he seems to want to control his son more than the average father would so Draco would be more likely to be less dominate to someone who has authority over him. Harry, as the dom in their bond, would definitely be in the more authoritative position.
    Can't wait for next chapter.
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