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Reviews for A Secret Fantasy

By : IShantsay
  • From ANON - Maudie on March 24, 2005
    Hey this was really different and new. I really hope you continue cause I want to see "it" happen. I think it's great when lovers trust each other with their secret fantasies.

    Please continue. Please? LOL
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  • From ANON - Kerri-Lynn on March 24, 2005
    Ok I have to say-I Love It!!!! So kinky yet so exciting. Please, please write more. I can't wait to see what happens. Great job!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 24, 2005
    You write well; please share the rest.
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  • From ANON - Lisa on March 24, 2005
    well, that was different. i really didn't know what to expect, but that caught me off guard. keep going. i wanna keep reading it.
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  • From ANON - Sandy on March 24, 2005
    I liked the fact you put a warning on your story. It is extremly well written and I'm curious for more. Besides, considering some of the truly bizarre things I've read on the net, your's is more along the lines of creative kink :) Well written and a bit naughty, the best kind. I hope you continue on this story..


    Sandy
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  • From ANON - dragon 34 on March 24, 2005
    i would like to read a third chapter. when i read the first i thought he wanted something illegal, like him wanting to do a child, i was relieved when he said urinating. you really had me worried.
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  • From ANON - totallylost on March 24, 2005
    go for it! i would be instering to read probly close to rice's buety triolgy

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  • From ANON - akasha on March 24, 2005
    well, it is a very interesting PWP ficlet, but you should always finish what you start! besides, it's not UTTERLY repulsive, but strange indeed.
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  • From ANON - lydia on March 24, 2005
    why not continue. it is an interesting read.
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  • From ANON - SeveressaSnape on March 24, 2005
    Finally!! Somebody that realizes there are just as many nerve endings "through the back door" that enjoy being stimulated as there are anywhere else! While this idea is not spoken about much, God gave us a playground to play in with lots of different toys; (our bodies and bits). We would be very remiss to not explore every one.... You gave plenty of warning and you are writing your story very realistically as far as character is concerned. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - wow on March 24, 2005
    well you promised squick and I was expecting a lot of things, but not that. Still I like the idea. Great story your really creative. Update soon!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 24, 2005
    Of course you should finish it! The thing I hate most in fanfic isn't bad writing, songfics, or authors who appear to place their punctuation with a oujie board- it's unfinished fics. It vexes me greatly! So, please, please finish it. I really like how sensitively you've dealt with the characters and their relationship- you're a good writer (wish I knew what your usual plume was- I'd love to read your other stuff.)
    Though I have nothing against watersports, I'm not particularly into them either. But I Really want to see H and S do the deed (and the fantasty)- proof enough for me that what makes someone or something sexy is the desire- and the trust- between said persons. The fact that Severus desires this so much that he will trust Hermione and tell her, and the trust she has in his kindness to her, and the trust that she holds that she doen't want to hurt him..... I think I lost the train of my thought there. But, the desire and trust you show between these two really makes me want to see the end. Hope you update soon :)
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  • From ANON - peggywoo on March 24, 2005
    While I doubt that the subject matter will ever excite me, it does look to be an interesting interaction between the two of them. And not too squicky after all... if I were Hermione I'd be more worried about bursting out laughing than about running away in horror.
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  • From ANON - Joanna scarlett on March 24, 2005
    *smirk* Is that all....Jeez, with the way you were carrying on I thought he wanted something MUCH worse, I think Hermione handled the situation quite well, it is quite an unusual kink but not nearly as out there as some and I think it is quite sweet of her to be willing to accomodate him.
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  • From ANON - Ms Severus Snape on March 24, 2005
    Well, his fantasy was not quite what I thought it was going to be but I was close, I figured it would be a, what did you call it, a "water sport"? I have never heard that expression, but I have heard of the fetish in my Human Sexuality class at Uni. Anyway, I am open-minded and still willing to read. Update soon please!!
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