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Reviews for A Very Pleasant Christmas Present

By : sexylilkitten
  • From luvhp on June 25, 2007
    MMmm, what a nice friend, but what about tomorrow??? :)
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  • From ANON - somechick73 on July 18, 2005
    This needs more chapters, but it's written well. Please, continue, and if you have the time, let me know when you update via email, so that I can read it. ;)
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  • From ANON - Rabid Squirrel Hunter on April 03, 2005
    Quite awesome. Loved it.
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  • From ANON - vgss on March 26, 2005
    Good scene, well-paced. I noticed you happen to use the same term repeatedly very close together (as I usally do before correcting it).

    Ex: flicking her tonuge, thrust, own hand/own tongue.

    Just a little advice that another read-though might help a bit.
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