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By : Cupiditatis
  • From ANON - Tris on May 08, 2005
    wow. you must up-date!!! i like how this story is going.
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  • From Teda on May 08, 2005
    Very nice chapter. Always good writing and getting even better I see. Finally the two have stopped pretending not to be attracted to one another! You've even motivated me to actually finish my own fanfiction with Fred and Angelina. SO thanks. ^_^
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  • From ANON - mimi on May 07, 2005
    :Whistles: Now that's what I like! Can anyone say sexual tension? Now with her stalker out on the run, their relationship will only get more interesting. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Miki on May 07, 2005
    Can I mail you some chocolate? Go do your homework...I think I can hang on a little longer.
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  • From ANON - tdk on May 07, 2005
    *Screams and howls* Oh, you did it again, you horrible tease. Although I'm thrilled these two are finally making some head way with each other. Whew! Hot. Great chapter. ^_^
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  • From ANON - ShadowandFlamePanther on May 04, 2005
    And now the plot thickens. That was great. I never expected her to tell him to lay with her in his bed. That was sweet on her part and how he acted towards the end of the chapter was just perfect. I love how you can show the slytherin boy's romantic and caring side.

    It was worth the wait on the update and please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - fraser on May 04, 2005
    that lance guy is a real bleep(not sure if i can cuss here, hes a boy born out of wedlock, if you catch my drift) but other than that i
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  • From ANON - tdk on May 02, 2005
    Oh, that was just mean! I'm going to hex you for leaving me all anxious to read more. Update!!!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - lensa on May 01, 2005
    Great chapter...... I would have emphasized how hard she hit her head a little more...but other than tha I really enjoyed reading this chapter...UPDATE
    lensa
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  • From ANON - Eboni on April 30, 2005
    This is such an excellent story. There are too few Angelina-centric fics out there, and even fewer well-written ones. That attack was rather chilling; I can't *wait* to see what happens next. Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - mimi on April 30, 2005
    Damnit! I miss updates and see what happens. This attack was a surprise, but since yu said this story is still on going, I'm dying to read what happens next. Marcus to the rescue I'm sure. Good update.
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  • From ANON - Evilevergreen on April 27, 2005
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    Okay, I am so sorry for the second review. Please forgive me. =)

    But I was thinking, since Angelina only believes she has a stalker, because Marcus said she did. . . what if she started thinking that maybe Marcus was her stalker?

    I mean think about it. In that one chapter where he's asking her about her past relationships-- he asked her about guys she had turned down, well, wasn't he one of them?

    Then of course the flowers she received when she realized that maybe someone was watching her-- were roses, or did she think that was a joke? Because I think it was Oliver who convinced her to get help, right? Anywho, wouldn't she take in the fact of Marcus
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  • From ANON - lensa on April 26, 2005
    hey,
    Good so far but mabye you should give Angelina a social life or something...she's becoming sort of one dimensional. Second...please oh please do not make the stalker Draco Malfoy...I hope that is not what the grey eyes were hinting at. K on a fabulous note I love your stalker points of view...they add a good creepiness to it all..ya know. NE way update Soon

    Lensa
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  • From ANON - ShadowandFlamePanther on April 26, 2005
    This is the first ever Marcus/Angel story I have ever read. It is getting so good so will he ever kiss her? Good job please update soon.
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  • From ANON - lensa on April 24, 2005
    Yay!! Ok mabye I am too happy, but I am glad you updated. I can't think of anything to critique, your writing style is consistent, and fairly detailed, and your very good at character developement...So keep writing.
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