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By : keladry
  • From HeartStar on November 15, 2009
    I would like to see where you go with this story
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  • From HeartStar on November 15, 2009
    what inspired this? will harry get revenge?
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  • From kitty08 on March 07, 2009
    wow a very intense chapter!! I liked it and would love to read more!!! so please please update soon
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  • From ANON - PHANTOM on January 11, 2007
    OMG YOU SOO NEED TO CONTINUE THIS, I WAS ACTUALLY HOPING THAT SOMEONE FOUND HARRY BEFORE HE GOT TO HIS ROOM, SOMEONE LIKE DRACO... HMMM MAYBE DRACO TRIES TO FORCE HIMSELF ON HARRY ALSO, ONLY TO REALIZE HARRY HAS ALREADY JUST BEEN RAPED.. I DUNNO JUST SOME THOUGHTS,,,, OKAY WELL HOWEVER YOU DO IT, YOU STILL NEED TO FINISH IT!!!
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  • From ANON - Savanna Maxwell on February 02, 2006
    this is awesome! but please tell me it wasn't actually Sev???? *bawls* please continue!!!
    luv lots,
    Vanna
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  • From ANON - IOTR on December 17, 2005
    Definetly continue. There will be pain if you dont *smirk*. i luv harry-torch just as much as i luv harry himself! ^__^ You will find horible things in your shoes if you dont post.
    Hail Satan, IOTR

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  • From ANON - sapphire on November 30, 2005
    grate story realy and im not just saying this to make you feel better!!!!!! you need to keep writing another chapter and another and another and .....well you get the idea!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - anestasia on October 20, 2005
    you have to write more!
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  • From ANON - Shadow on October 13, 2005
    OMG sweet god!!! how could he do that to an innocent?!? my god harry has to tell!!! i mean something!!! right?...... plz i beg u e-mail me when u update just tell me the name of the story plz and chapter 2 so i no plzzz i beg i HAVE to know wht happens!!
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  • From ANON - BakNek on July 06, 2005
    I like! So there's more right? It begs for more to be written! PLEAAAAAAAAASE update sooooooooooooon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 17, 2005
    NOt a fan of rape stories. And too OOC. I don't see Snape as the "sudden attack" type. MOre likely he'd plot out a twisted seduction. You could do a sequel where Harry dreamed it all and then realizes he wants Snape to dominate/force him. Which could make some interesting BDSM. Which for some reason is more appealing to me than rape stories. ;) Not to mention there could be a whole lot of fun in Harry trying to figure out how to get what he wants from Snape. :D
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  • From ANON - Ima on April 07, 2005
    Love it!
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  • From ANON - antipyro on March 29, 2005
    Oh, a very good start to writing. Spelling, grammar is o.k. Story line, should have had some warnings on it, see story codes list, but hey, what are we all doing here anyways?

    I don't know which way you're intending to continue and if you'll put any softness into it or not. I'm thinking no, but it would be so tempting to have Harry want more from a simple gesture of say Severus whispering his name or telling Harry he's beautiful or just making the ground soft with moss before banging him in the Dark Forest. You could also develop the lust Severus has for Harry in future chapters.

    If you continue on a hard line, you'll have to reign in that Gryffindor spirit somehow with some pretty strong blackmail words or something. Maybe doing this is something Severus can do to make Harry stronger in the end, no pun intended, for when he fights Voldemort.....just a thought.

    I'll look for more.....soon....!!!!
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  • From ANON - Teresa on March 29, 2005
    It was good. I think you should continue on with the story and make Harry pregnant. Severus will have t deal with the consequences.
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  • From ANON - auburn on March 29, 2005
    I love Sev/Harry stories. It's refreshing to see Sev being a bastard from time to time. I like your story. Please update soon.
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