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Reviews for Taken Care Of

By : foxracerchick129
  • From ANON - Cas on April 30, 2005
    Wow thank goodness you are keeping that last chapter.. thatt was, as my kids would say, Hell Cool!
    you are doing a wonderful job here.. but problem is i need more... and now
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  • From ANON - kayla on April 27, 2005
    Well, I kind of like the old snape, it adds to the attraction, if you know what I mean. It just wouldn't be the same if Snape didn't look the way he always did. however, I'm so curious as to how he looks now, hopefully not to differnet. Maybe you could make Snape a little hotter than the real one, you know, maybe make the nose a little less prominant, or make his hair silky instead of greasy, small changes but nothing to big. As for a vote, I think you should keep the old Snape or make small changes to satisfy people on both sides.
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  • From ANON - Smilie on April 27, 2005
    I like the last chapter leave it be please
    thank
    Smilie
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  • From ANON - yana on April 27, 2005
    Well it's not that bad. But you only wrote that Sev looks more attractive, you didn't wrote how he *really* looks like.
    Could you please describe his looks better.
    If you do this, than YES keep the chapter!!!! (If you don't feel like doing so, than you shoudn't keep this chapter.)

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  • From ANON - Fairy1 on April 27, 2005
    I totally think you should leave the last chapter in, it's a nice twist that i havent seen before and I'd like to see how it turns out. Just my point of view though!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 27, 2005
    Shouldn't it be your decision?
    It's your story. If you think your plot's going where you want it to then don't change anything!
    ^^
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  • From ANON - Kitsune Morgan on April 26, 2005
    I've read the whole story and I have to say that I like it the way that it's going. I like the fact that the glamors are brought into the story. I think that it's cool that you have Severus looking better then the way he is seen by the kids at school. I hope that you leave the story the way that it is. That means that there is something that only his sister, Harry and a few others get to see.
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  • From ANON - eeb on April 26, 2005
    Dude, I loved the glamor part, you could go many places with it, AND IT'S YOUR STORY. DO WHATEVER THE HELL THAT YOU WANT WITH IT. Reviews are only suggestions, remember.
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  • From ANON - Mistyville on April 26, 2005
    I love the glamour thing, I mean if you work it into the story & explain it some it could work.
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  • From ANON - Cre on April 26, 2005
    I don't really like that idea for the glamors. I'm not flaming you I'm just responding to your request of whether or not you should delete it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 26, 2005
    just keep it
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  • From ANON - Ashe on April 26, 2005
    Okay so this is just my opinion. I kind of like the idea of keeping Sev the way he is, and don't really think the glamours are necessary. However, this is your story, so I say do what you want. Either way, update soon :)
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  • From ANON - greenangel on April 26, 2005
    i like the last chapter it's different then others it's good. and i like your story
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  • From ANON - Antonina Senia on April 26, 2005
    Keep that last chapter and update soon.
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on April 26, 2005
    Keep the chapter. It was a really good idea to have glamours. Make Snape real cute. The story is really great. Looking forward to reading more.
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