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By : foxracerchick129
  • From ANON - antipyro on April 26, 2005
    Vernon Dursley should get a piece of that wooden paddle, maybe over the head, like 'accidentally' or something.

    Dudley should get something really sadistic, like f____d by Piers, no lube! Piers should get some hurting too.

    Petunia should be made to suffer for her Pity of Harry and her lack of action to help him more.

    Sorry, hate to be mean, but come on....this is retaliation. An eye for an eye comes to mind.

    Love the story continuation. When do more of the Durstrang students play a part. Hey, maybe Harry can befriend them and they'll do the nasty stuff with the Dursley's. he he he.

    Post soon, thanks......MWAH!
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  • From ANON - ann the flying buddhajew on April 25, 2005
    i really like it! I'm such a sap for "poor abused harry fics", but jessica is such a neat twist on an old theme! And regarding what might happen between harry and snape.... I was thinking maybe there could be the first kiss before the final battle and then it could take the fast lane afterward. I don't know...thats why you write em and I read em.
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on April 25, 2005
    This is really good and I'm really looking forward to reading more. You could have the Dursleys cause more trouble. Say Vernon somehow kidnaps Harry and hurts him, but then gets his punishment, preferably from Sev. Get Petunia to meet up with her Daughter. Upto u. Intruiged on what you've got planned.
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  • From ANON - antipyro on April 24, 2005
    Loved the footsie part, thanks.

    Yah, Severus in short hair, uh uh, wouldn't work at all, yech!

    Went to your site, nice pix. I'll watch for more later.

    Hmmm, ideas....let me think........

    Great work especially on the floo network breakdown, giggle. What a way to get Harry and Severus together, when he's sooo hot for Severus, don't we all know, lol.

    Many confections for you to keep you going.
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  • From ANON - obsidianblade on April 24, 2005
    Gosh i love this story keep up the great work and update as soon as possible
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  • From ANON - Hambares on April 24, 2005
    Harry and Severus are so cute together! Fun chapter!
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  • From ANON - Phoenix 5 on April 24, 2005
    Yes, please, go on with thus story, I like it a lot.
    Please update soon
    Phoenix
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  • From ANON - Cre on April 22, 2005
    Cool story so far. I really liek Jessica, she's really funny and its nice that Harry has another good friend that he can confide in. Harry would look a lot better without his glasses, wouldn't he? ^_^ I can't wait for you to update soon.
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on April 21, 2005
    Wow. This story is the best. Hope to see more soon and hope the Dursleys and Voldie don't cause any trouble.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 21, 2005
    yay you did it
    i'll make sure to let you know what i think
    please update soon
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  • From ANON - antipyro on April 20, 2005
    Ooooo, tell me they go to dinner as planned and Harry and Severus play footsie or something......

    I really laughed at Severus getting a hair cut, I'm surprised the scissors didn't break like in cutting Sampson's hair, his secret strength, lol. I can just imagine him fussing at the hair stylist and him playing with his hair, trying different styles, just toooo funny.

    Mmmm, Severus in green, my favourite colour, how delicious, yummy!
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  • From ANON - icestar on April 20, 2005
    nice, very nice indeed. :luvs chapter four, and the two guys fainting:

    anyways, hope ya update soon. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 19, 2005
    thanks jessica for answering me
    but they should do it before the first battle scene
    it would add more emotion when they part and if anything happens
    get some sleep
    but update soon
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  • From TheDarkBeginning on April 19, 2005
    OH, that was good....you need to update soon.....I happen to be a big fan of Harry/Severus as I said when I reviewed the other fanfic.....I love it, now...please write more....pretty please.


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  • From ANON - Snake on April 19, 2005
    Ohh dont saty up sp late well get more posted soon
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