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Reviews for I Will Always Find You

By : BotticellisAngel
  • From ANON - angel on May 24, 2005
    heheheheh that was a good chapter... i cant wait in till you update i just had to reread the hole thing before i read this chapter ....and i still love this story well cant wait in till next time ... so love,peace and fanfic ~lol~ bye for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - bobbie on May 24, 2005
    Happy Birthday to me, thank you for the gift,,,this is the best one i got...and ;you posted just for me...lol.lol.lol.
    This story is great,,I hope you continue writing this...its great...poor Hermione,,i totaly understand the furstraion...cant wait to read how Severus releaves her of her problem,,,lol// great story
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  • From ANON - Kayree on May 24, 2005
    YAY YAY YAY!!!!!!! you updated!!! another fantastic chapter Angel!! This really is a great story and i cant wait to read the rest!!!
    Keep writing and i'll keep reviewing! ********** 10 Stars!!!
    Love & Luck,
    Kayree *mwa*
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on May 24, 2005
    Oh you know they have to make love....i think Hermione would kill whoever interrupts them if they don't! Lol!

    Please update asap!
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  • From ANON - Snapes_lady_in_waiting on May 23, 2005
    was okay. a bit rushed. not much detail. no suspence. but okay.
    SLIW
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  • From ANON - fraser on May 22, 2005
    i absolutely love it even though it is kinda sad
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  • From slygriff21 on May 22, 2005
    The last two chapters were great! I love how strong you have Hermione! It's great! Update again and soon!

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Shadowknight on May 22, 2005
    Yay! Chapter 17 read. Very good. Good to see the edits. I've read much worse in the grammar/spelling dept on affn, so the minor ones here are minimal. I expect that the romance will be accelerating soon. :)
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  • From ANON - Kayree on May 22, 2005
    You can't stop there!!! keep writing!!! please update soon, this is such a good story and you're a really talented writer.
    Update quickly please! I can't wait to read the rest.
    Love & Luck,
    Kayree
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  • From ANON - Bree on May 21, 2005
    I cannot wait for some action!!!! Great story. I like the characters you created and I feel that you can make Severus act any damn way you want since it is your story! It's kind of refreshing having Snape be soft
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  • From ANON - Cristie on May 21, 2005
    Oh my, what a wonderful chapter. I loved it and am glad you are continuing the story even though it was somewhat of a fitting end. You were right though, I did admire the way Hermione could put this attack in perspective. Even during the attack it seems. I am glad Narcissa also followed through with support for Hermione and gives all of us some hope for the Malfoy clan. Looking forward to your next update....soon I hope.
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  • From ANON - Tithen on May 21, 2005
    Wow, you get your chapters done fast! I have always been painstakingly slow, because I love to edit. I enjoyed this chapter and wish it had been longer! It is great that you keep the readers hungering for more!

    Much better with the dialogue, by the way. You have the capitalization just right! Make sure you use a comma instead of a period in instances like this, though:

    Yours: "Not as of yet." the worried Professor replied.
    Corrected: "Not as of yet," the worried Professor replied.

    However, if the dialogue ends in an exclamation point or a question mark, do not change those to a comma. Only use a period instead of a comma if you do not have a "he said" type of phrase after the dialogue - only if an entirely new sentence starts instead.
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on May 21, 2005
    Wow! Sat down and read it in an evening... I love it! Can't wait to see what happens next, I imagine Voldy's gonna be furious over Lucius's loss. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - TaintedAngel on May 21, 2005
    Lemons??? hehe Lemons?
    Are you going to end the story with them getting together? or are you going to continue it and show their life together?
    should I just stop being a nosy witch and see what happens next?? lol

    TaintedAngel xxx
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on May 21, 2005
    Awww!

    Oh shit....what is Dumbledore gonna say about Severus and Hermione?!

    Oh god...you have to update asap.....please!
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