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Reviews for Divine Madness

By : Doloresladyofpain
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 05, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Citten on August 18, 2006
    wow, great story! i do hope that you will continue the story and that would make me very happy! plus more and in greater detail with severus and hermione would no go amiss either!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 28, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - missmaryrae on June 15, 2005
    I really like this beginning. Please continue!
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  • From BrianChattillon on April 22, 2005
    Interesting First Chapter. Short but interesting. Continue orevie will be in a pink dress sprouting Barney songs..........*Shuders*

    Please continue
    BrianDarksoul(Twisted and Dark)
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  • From ANON - Salem on April 06, 2005
    Details, details! That was short, good for a first starting off, but try adding more detail. Make ur reader experience it. It was a bit to fast when you brought Snape into the picture. It could be a mystery for Hermione (and wouldn't he just rather put an eye-tricking spell to make it look like he raped her? It's too soon for her to give it to him. She's his student for Christ's sake!). You kept him sinister though!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 05, 2005
    All i can say is wow,

    update fast
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  • From ANON - Cherie on April 05, 2005
    This could be interesting. It feels a bit rushed right now. I'd say just take your time and explore detail. Put yourself in her place and explain the searing pain that ran through her....her thoughts....What was it in Snapes voice that made her calm. The more vivid details you can put into your story, the more you will draw in your audience. You have to make them see a movie in thier minds just by your writing. They need to feel if it's cold, hot, moist, muggy, soft, slow, passionate, the wetness of his lips on hers...how her body and why it reacted differently to him. If you must, put yourself in each of the characters places and explore your own thoughts and feelings.
    Good luck to you...I'll keep an eye out for updates.
    Cherie
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  • From on April 05, 2005
    The ever smooth Professor Snape, a very good start to your very first fic. PLease continue.
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  • From slygriff21 on April 04, 2005
    Awsome so far! Please update and soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on April 03, 2005
    Good start! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - ray on April 03, 2005
    MORE!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - jp on April 03, 2005
    love it so far, can't wait to read more
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  • From En4cerMax on April 03, 2005
    Hmmmm, very intresting. A little short, but intresting. Do keep writing, my dear. The rest of the world would like to see what you write. :)
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