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Reviews for One In A Million

By : elibdally
  • From ANON - Bea on August 19, 2005
    Whoo hoo! Great chapter. I'm sure the next one will be just as good too, can't wait to read it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 18, 2005
    Eeee!! This is so good. Update soon!

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  • From ANON - pretty_wicked on August 18, 2005
    Great story!! Loving it, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - princess_zombie on August 18, 2005
    Interesting story, I like the plotline so far. But you really need to work on your spelling, maybe you should get another beta, you can never have too many of them! You have a ton of incorrect homonyms, which can get very distracting. Also, I noticed that you kept writing G-d instead of God. Is that because of a religious belief that you have? If it is, kudos to you, if it isn't, it's kind of annoying. And instead of godson you wrote G-d son. It's one word, and the "g" isn't capitalized.
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  • From ANON - intcrimgrrl on August 18, 2005
    Good story - very interesting tactic to take to place the entire dilemma on Hermione's shoulders. The little details you have in this last chapter, like Draco playing with her hair, were quite good. You have some issues with spelling though, especially with hominyms like (dear should've been deer, in deer in the headlights). I really like the story, good job.
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  • From ANON - whogirl on August 18, 2005
    After ending the chapter like that, you definitly have to update a whole lot faster. Please, I want more! Also this was an amazing chapter.
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  • From ANON - curlyq2713 on August 18, 2005
    ::gasps:: oooh, new chapters! i almost gave up on this story. this is a really good story, please update soon so you don't lose your readers :-). it's getting more and more interesting with each chapter, please update soon! :-D
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  • From ANON - moxie on August 18, 2005
    I LOVE this story! Great job! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Gentileschi on August 18, 2005
    Great chapter! I love this story! :)
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  • From ANON - angel on August 18, 2005
    man ... i fill sorry for draco and i hope hermione will talk to him now and will ok it .... i wonder how the professor and his parents acted when draco grad mione and ran ... well in till next time later

    angel
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  • From ANON - heather on August 18, 2005
    Great Chapters! I'm so glad you updated! I love this story, please keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Anna on August 18, 2005
    Ahhh! So good of you to update. I so love veela fics and yours is one of my favourites. Love the Hermione and the Draco characterisations. Tooo many people make them instantly fall and love and its all roses and no interest. Love the punch!!!! But want so much more!
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  • From ANON - Stag on August 18, 2005
    Veelas are so sexy. I love Veela fics...Especially Draco/Hermione Veela fics.
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  • From ANON - Petalsoft on August 18, 2005
    Keep going. Can't wait to find out what Draco does to her.
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  • From ANON - Avanell on August 18, 2005
    Hey, i guess I did review a few times (snicker snicker). And was I then first, too? Wow!
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