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By : lightgoddess
  • From AprilEmprich on April 10, 2005
    Ha, that was a good chapter. Severus got what he deserved!!! And even if Leah thinks she did I don't, he never should have grabbed her!!!! He may have saved her life, but she still had every right to be angry with the situation. Post again soon and thanks for the timeline with the Remus thing!!! I can't wait!!!
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  • From ANON - john the heavy on April 10, 2005
    she gave him one in the BALLS!?! couldn't she have broke his nose or something?!? but asides from that intial shock this story really really good! i don't think i've ever read a fic quite like it, certainly with serverus getting knocked in his ....................................bits
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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on April 10, 2005
    Brilliant chapter, loved the order to Dobby, take me to Remus, plus get Severus some Ice.

    I just love Leah, from the last chapter its obvious she thinks she will disappear back to her
    own time, as quick as she appeared at Hogwarts, SIGH.......I wanted her to stay and become
    one third of a delicious sandwich, Remus and Severus, just think!!!

    Best Wishes, Sent e.mail as well to clear certain things up.






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  • From ANON - dido on April 10, 2005
    Whoa! Leah's quite the busy bee, isn't she? I don't really see why she got so upset about the Lucius thing. After she the one who so "liberated" and clinical about sex, trying to do two guys in one day. Supposedly Leah's read the HP books so she knows what bad news Lucius is and she should be glad that all she had to do was a hand job for the subterfuge to protect her. She just doesn't seem consistant with her rationale about sex.
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  • From ANON - antipyro on April 10, 2005
    This is better than I ever imagined.

    So, how much of you is there in Leah?

    Don't all the females who read this want to be Leah???? YESSSSSS! In our own twisted ways.

    This is terrific: touching, tender, defiant, intelligent, sexy, a little angsty, and of course the humour.

    I don't usually read M/F encounters, but this is great, especially with an OFC. Leah could be a sister, we know her so well, and yet, she's still got some interesting history. Like how does she get back??????

    I'll be watching for more.
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  • From ANON - Papaya on April 10, 2005
    Had to read two chapters to catch up . . . well worth it! Like Leah's tattoo, the emotion behind it . . . really wonderful imagery. Like that Lucius is not as well-endowed as one would think . . . like the idea of him using the cane to compensate. Poor Leah, having to do that to Lucius! But still much better than what would have happened had he had his way. Looks like Severus and Leah are going to be able to work past their altercation, very good! Both chapters were excellent, and conveyed a lot of information about all three involved in the romance. Remus behaved just like the gentleman we all know he is when Leah cam to him, warmed my heart. I also like that Leah wants the pain of the broken toes as a reminder not to lose her cool like that . . . says a lot about her personality, right along with the tattoo. Can't wait to see what's going to happen next! Are we going to see a little fun with Remus? As always, thanks for the wonderful entertainment, and please update soon!
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  • From ANON - JJ on April 10, 2005
    Ha, Ha, Ha! I think Lupin was right. I've never before read of SS. getting hurt by a muggle. Way to go! And totally believable as a reaction from our perspective. Way to go!
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  • From ANON - Papaya on April 10, 2005
    Well, since I had to read two chapters in order to catch up, I'll review them both! First off, I really liked the tattoo, and the emotion behind it . . . really gret imagery! I liked thta Lucius was not-too-well-hung . . . I like the idea of him using the cane to compensate. Poor Leah, though, having to do that! But it was definitely better than what Lucius would have had in mind for her. And the whole fight with Severus was very well written, can't say that I blame her for reacting that way. They still have some things to talk about, but it's looking like they'll be able to get past this whole debacle. And her wanting to keep the pain as a reminder . . . tells a lot about her personality, as much as the tattoo on the bottom of her foot. These two chapters were both excellent, letting us all see so much more about all three characters. I like that she went to Remus, and that he behaved as the gentleman we all know him to be. Are we going to see some more fun with Remus? Can't wait to see where all of this is going. As always, thank you for the wonderful entertainment, and please update soon!
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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on April 10, 2005
    A very good chapter, I thought the rose on the foot, plus the reason for it, very potent.

    I love Lucius, I just can't imagine him with a small cock, have you seen Playwitch?

    Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Alauralen on April 09, 2005
    Ha, I also always thought that Malfoy Sr had to be compensating for something tiny!!!! I loved the scene in the garden by the way!!! Who wouldn't jump him if they had the chance?! Still can't wait to see some action with Remus though. Damn Severus for being so posessive!!! Update soon!!! Thanks for giving 2 chapters in one day though, it was greatly appreciated!!!
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  • From ANON - Catpower on April 09, 2005
    Ha! So Leah had to give Lucius manual relief and he was tiny and not the sex god we sometimes assume (I've a pic of Lucius and Sev on my desktop). Serves Leah right. I NEVER get to shag a gorgeous sexy wizard and then go for a star-gazing picnic with a gentleman were-wolf and then force them to accept that they both get to shag me but only on my terms (not that I'd mind!). She's got it made, this girl. Liked the foot job. What could possibly be going to happen next - you've got a way of pulling the unexpected out of a hat.
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  • From ANON - JJ on April 09, 2005
    Well, she did set herself up for anything. Interesting direction to go. I laughed at Malfoy. I bet she makes Snape pay.
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  • From ANON - Papaya on April 09, 2005
    Ah, the power of music! It doth soothe the savage beast and all that. Great chapter . . . hot sweaty garden sex between Leah and Snape, followed by romance with Remus. Absolutely wonderful. Can't wait to see where this is going. Leah is most definitely a force to contend with! I don't think either of these boys really know what they're dealing with! Thanks for the great entertainment, and please update soon!
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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on April 09, 2005
    When did you start a new story?. Anyway it is really hot! Totally different to your other fanfic.

    Please enclude me on update list for Out of Nowhere as well. Leah is a brilliant.

    Best wishes.
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  • From ANON - JJ on April 09, 2005
    Cool! And she can write hot scenes too. I don't know how a "modern" woman would fit into their mindset, but I say go for Lupin too! I bet he's HOT! Would'nt it be cool if her singing signals that she can do "magic" too? Can she juggle both, or will she have to choose? Will she have a spot at Hogwartz, or will she end up a student? Nice work. Update soon.
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