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Reviews for Razorblade Connection

By : DemonBlaze
  • From ANON - Death in a Pink Boa on April 17, 2005
    As always, I liked the new installment. I think you should consider a different way of doing the flashback, it didn't read that well the way it is. You may possibly want to cut it. I'm all a twitter to know what the side effects of the dreamless sleap poition is. I'm glad to see some of Draco's point of view, we don't get enough of that.

    Egotistcally yours
    -Death in the Pink
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  • From ANON - Death in a Pink Boa on April 15, 2005
    I like this chapter to, I like how your not just having Harry and Draco through themselves at eachother, take it slow, that's the way to go. The one thing I wasn't so clear on is how Dumbledoor could have prevented Sirius from go to the MoM, Snape was the one who contacted him, and Dumbledoor didn't arrive until after Sirius had left Grimaldplace. Let me say again that your use of discription is divine, and I'd like to see you use it even more. This little "understanding" that Harry and Draco a developing is really quite interesting.
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  • From ANON - Alexa on April 12, 2005
    ABSOLUTELY WONDERFULL, DRAWS YOU IN, JUST GREAT!

    I love how throughfully you develop the story. It's already one of my favorites!

    Please keep posting!
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  • From ANON - yana on April 12, 2005
    very good. very very!!!! good!!!! ^_^
    You write Harry realy well (draco a little less but you're getting there .)
    I hope you continue your story.

    P.s. I agree, don't stop writing wonderful stories because you don't have a lot reviews. You are great!!!!!

    ~greetz
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  • From ANON - Death in a Pink Boa on April 11, 2005
    P.S. Bitch, don't be discoraged by that lack of Reviews, merely because most people arn't sufficticated enough to appricate your style is no reason to stop writing, don't be like Daniel Steel and conform to a standard formula, so that the masses exept you.
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  • From ANON - Death in a Pink Boa on April 11, 2005
    I am pleased to see anther lovely chapter. I didn't find this one quite as enjoyable as the last three, but it was still good. I would like to see some more of your discription, I think that is where you are most talented. The image you have drawn of Harry is most intriging. While you began developeing Draco quite nicely in chapter two, a feel that you still need to work more on him. I am very pleased that you have started building him up though, and you have an interesting way of portraying his relasionship with his parents. Your entire story intrigues me, and as a person who has cut before in the past, I feel as if I have a connection with both Harry and Draco. Having the reader develop a conection with your creations is very important, and you have acomplished this. I can't wait until your next chapter.


    With Hope
    -The Pink Boa
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  • From NekoTenshi on April 10, 2005
    Harry just keeps getting darker in each chapter and I love it! The room is awesome as well I can't wait for the next chapter! It's getting to good!
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  • From ANON - Death in a Pink Boa on April 10, 2005
    Ohhhh! this is intriging. Very dark, I like. Is this a room Voldemorts created? or one of Salisars (yah, I can't spell)? You have a very intriging way with Harry and Draco, and orginal aswell. I love it. Keep writing, wonderful fic.
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  • From ANON - Lilac on April 07, 2005
    its really good. i love the plot.
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  • From NekoTenshi on April 07, 2005
    Interesting...very interesting ^.^ Harry is bloody cool in this one...so is Draco...^.^ I like the fact that both of them seem so much alike...and the fact that Harry is darker than what everyone perceives him to be ^.^ Can't wait for the next chapter. Hope its out soon.

    ~Neko~
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