Click Here!

Reviews for Truth or Dare, Harry Potter Style!

By : MimiMoonstone
  • From TheSonOfJokerAndHarley on April 09, 2008
    Draco in drag... I've never been harder
    Report Review

  • From bananasforyou on November 06, 2007
    cute!
    Report Review

  • From erospandora on August 22, 2007
    um...okay this needs some work.

    A) Add more description; people want to know and be able to mentally see what the character(s) are doing. So instead of 'Draco: sits down' try Draco sat back down on the cold stone floor of the room of requirement, tossing the back portion of some of his robe behind him so he could sit more comfortably as he gazed out into the circle of miscreants and he's newly found lover.

    B) Don't add yourself in as a character to progress your story it's just... well bad form.

    C) Use quote marks instead of just having their names there and letting the reader find out if they're saying something. Some people even just you little ' marks to show speech.

    I do like the way this story has been going aside from those things however... even though I'm not a fan of Draco in drag *silently weeps for him*
    Please continue.
    Report Review

  • From xamphira on December 26, 2006
    It's a cute idea, but I wish you'd written it as a story rather than just the dialogue.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - XxVelvetRainDropsxX on December 23, 2006
    LMAO ur good i like it and i agree draco must keep it on all night, ur writing style reminds me of one of my friends lol shes a crazy red head with a laptop lol yah so keep going!!!! xD
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Deidre on December 02, 2006
    omg...leave draco with the drag..and HURRY AND UPDATE! sorry, dont mean to be rude, just really want to see what happens :) keep it up!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - minya on August 25, 2006
    draco should have a corset on
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Britts on June 30, 2006
    XDD I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^ This is really funny so far. Hehe! Thank you for writing this! Until next time! Nyaa!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Sofia on January 30, 2006
    Draco has to take it of. I like him better without high-heels ;)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Alana on January 10, 2006
    i review and request that draco take off all his clothes :D, or at least the tissue filled shirt lol. i was awsome, maybe next chapter...harry and draco action? *gives puppy dog eyes* pleeease????
    Report Review

  • From SpookyBunnie6493 on November 26, 2005
    Ha ha ha ha! This is great! I, quiet litterally, fell out of my chair laughing. Keep writing.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Not a member on October 08, 2005
    Come on, let himn take it off. good story. crazy girl with laptop was a little suttle though...

    Report Review

  • From ANON - Erica on April 12, 2005
    Draco cannot change out of drag, and can't wait to see how Ginny/Mione react to the kiss...hope they like it way more than Ron could ever dole out...
    Report Review

  • From ANON - DoomPiggy on April 08, 2005
    Draco can take of his drag, once he has to make out with Hermione; the decision should be his too! *cackles* More zest to the plot!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - catpower on April 08, 2005
    This is hilarious. Good one.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!