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Reviews for Unforgettable

By : Looneyluna
  • From ANON - Patrick on April 14, 2005
    Well, once again it's... me.

    Well done, absolutely well done.
    I would have been quite disappointed to see the story end after just 6 chaps, 6 incredibly short chaps if this slight criticism is allowed. ;) No, just joking. They could be longer, but I'm okay with it.
    Nice to see that Severus', well... snapeishness has increased a very recognizable bit. I like that as much as I like Hermione's fury about his continuing approaches.

    But indeed, I am craving for the moment they acknowledge their feelings for each other and might with lesser effects of the potion be a couple which you can take into a restaurant without their permanent need to shag each other senseless. Not that I don't like that, I absolutely do, but I'd just love the moment where they confess their "undying love" and are happily ever after. They will, won't they?

    As I mentioned in my first review I am already waiting for more of your truly inspiring story. And just in case you haven't noticed, I become a foolish drooling idiot as soon as something is about "the one true romantic love". And no, I'm not gay even if I must admit that I might come off as a sissy sometimes. *sighs*

    Keep on with this fabulous work.
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  • From ANON - QIK on April 14, 2005
    Ch 1
    This is like Ron would have put it: "Bloody brilliant!"
    I read about love and lust potions before but, to me, your personal touch of the general idea is to a certain extent new to me. I definitely like the idea that the potion "only" reveals fantasies and lusting that rested in the subconscious before.
    You could be a bit more detailed, not concerning the lemon, that's worded pretty good, but regarding the emotions, a language more flowery or metaphorical would suit my needs. But that's just my personal opinion because that style is what I like the most about a fic.
    I didn't find out if the story is completed yet, so just in case there is more in your mind: I'm already waiting, even if I still got 5 chaps to read.
    If it is completed... well, than in a few hours there will be another review following this one and dealing with my overall thoughts.

    *runs away and goes on reading*



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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on April 14, 2005
    Yummy and Excellant chapter!

    I await your next update eagerly!
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  • From ANON - sandy17lee on April 13, 2005
    Love your development of this oft used storyline. I think you sneaky Snape is funny and spot on. Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Ashley on April 13, 2005
    Yay! You updated! I'm very happy. I haven't noticed any of your spelling mistakes...until you pointed them out. Lol. Good chapter though. Update soon! I want to see what happens!
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  • From ANON - Susan on April 13, 2005
    Another good chapter, but you keep leaving us hanging! I have not found any canon mistakes, but if I do, I will email you privately. Love that Severus thinks one quick shag is going to help him. *snickers*. Oh well, the bigger they are.... Keep writing and I look forward to the next one, as always. :-)
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on April 13, 2005
    Great chapter, and so soon after i finished the others....brilliant timing! LOL!

    Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Yabo on April 12, 2005
    Love it! More more!
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on April 12, 2005
    Oh man....not another person who favours killer cliffies!

    Can't wait for your update!
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  • From ANON - Susan on April 12, 2005
    Damn him for obliviting her! But then, the story would not be twisting and turning at a nice pace, so I will not complain. I am looking forward to the next chapter...Serverus in this one was so typically Slytherin. LOVED IT!
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  • From ANON - GirlRedBalloonCornerBlahBlahBlah on April 12, 2005
    I loved it. Please please please update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on April 11, 2005
    Poor Hermione haveing such wonderful dreams about a dark stranger and then lusting after Snape in the middle of the Leaky Cauldren. Only to have him taunt her about the locket being for his lover. But I would have done the job for that price too!!
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  • From ANON - daygonna on April 11, 2005
    loved the new chapters. cant wait until u update again!
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  • From ANON - Darkness_Enthralled on April 11, 2005
    I love your story. It has a good rythum and the plot is amazing! The only thing I think I can comment on is some of your words are mis spelled, but other then that your story is perfect^-^. PLease don't stop writting 'Unforgettable'
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  • From ANON - Susan on April 11, 2005
    Pissed-off Snape! I absolutely love him going at Fred and George. Looking forward to more. Thanks
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