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By : Looneyluna
  • From ANON - JTBJAB on May 13, 2005
    Awww....another Weasley on the way...hehehe....i think losing the money from the shop is worse then being sent to Azkaban personally....so great idea for punishment!

    Please update soon....i need to know what happens next!
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on May 12, 2005
    Great chapter. Glad to see the twins get what for. Looking forward to the next part.
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on May 12, 2005
    Excellent chapter. Il ike how you layed out the court and stuff. Remus and Tonks! Perfect.

    cdk
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  • From ANON - Miki on May 12, 2005
    Rats...images of the two hell-bound maniacs in Azkaban were quite entertaining. Too bad they're so irresponsible, Molly could have made them permanent babysitters.

    Coming together nicely. Keep the chappies rolling, please.
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  • From ANON - June on May 12, 2005
    Ch 20 - hmm, so is there still a point in finding an antidote? Did Moody have any potion? Did the Weasley twins drink any of it themselves? I think I'd make the twins swear a wand oath to never again make a love or lust potion. Thanks for the new chapter!
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  • From ANON - Ashley on May 12, 2005
    This is an awesome story! I've been following it since chapter one! You are an awesome author and keep up the good work! Update soon! BTW, how many chapters are left?
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  • From ANON - GinnyW on May 12, 2005
    That was very nice. I like the way that you are doing this story. Very enjoyable chapter.
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  • From ANON - betty on May 11, 2005
    Will they, won't they? How many more chapters of this are we to be subjected to? You have a good story, but you seem to not know how far to take the concept. What does your beta have to say? Is it not their job to make a good story better?
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  • From ANON - Susan on May 09, 2005
    These guys just keep getting deeper and deeper! I cannot believe that Fred and George may get busted for doing something illegal! Love how you took this and keep your readers surprised. I swear I don't know what to expect next, but I do know that it will be good! Hope work is ok for you...sorry you can't sleep but am happy for the chapter. Hugs, Susan
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on May 08, 2005
    Aww no....i need a happy moment and soon!

    Please update asap....pwetty pwease!
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  • From ANON - Gannet on May 08, 2005
    Thanks for the update!
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on May 08, 2005
    First let me say I've been reading your story for a good while now and for the most part I like it. If I didn't I wouldn't eagerly await each chapter. The thing is, I was waiting for this chapter because the truth is out now and I expected angst, but not what has come about.

    I'm reading a very un-Hermione like Hermione here. I like a Hermione who's aggressive and doesn't let Snape walk all over her, but I think she's way OOC by now. Hermione is above all logical. She's a champion of the down trodden and someone who doesn't stand for injustice. The Hermione here is none of those things. This Hermione hasn't used any logic since the begining of this story and she's a real bitch besides. Not once BUT twice she has blamed Snape for the lust potion and he had nothing to do w/ it. Not only does she blame him, but she knows it's not his fault and she still tries to blame him. What is that all about? In "The Morning After" she was a complete bitch to him the minute after he woke her up. I kind of got the trying to save face thing, but she was unneccessarily cruel and even though she had her memory of the night before she blamed Snape by saying he drugged her when she knew better. She made him out to be the bad guy when he had nothing to do w/ it. Sure he wasn't Mr. Sweet Talk, but not only did she not give him a chance to be. She hurled insults and unfounded accusations at him right off. He wasn't going to erase her memory till she turned into a raving banshee. Finally we get to Chapter 19. She's heard the truth from Harry and she's looked in the pensive and again she blames Snape? I can see being mad about the obliviation and manipulation, but she didn't give the man much of a way to defend himself. The truth didn't seem to be enough to make her see he's as much a victim of that potion as she is. He told her the punch was spiked and she drank it. She found out again that the twins were the ones responsible, but she's still blaming Snape? What is that? This is the attitude we come to expect from Ron & Harry, but not Hermione. Yes, he lied and tried to manipulate her, but what choice did she give him? She treated him like a sick criminal when he's as effected as she is by the lust potion. He knew what honesty would get him. Insults and false accusations.

    Over all I love the story, hate Hermione. ;c) Oh well sweetie, you can't please everyone, right? You've got a good story though. It's fairly well written. A hell of an amusing plot, but a way off character Hermione. Snape is great though. You've got that greasy git, manipulative, sneaky, Slytherin snake down pat.
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  • From ANON - queenp on May 07, 2005
    Uh,oh...I wish there was a way that she could see her own memory again...This is such a wicked thing to do to our lovely Severus...(& Hermione)...I can't wait to see what is next. Update again soon!!!

    The twins need to be victims of their own potion....that would be an interesting twist...only they won't be limited to one girlfriend...several all preggars...and all curse them the way Ron was cursed...*giggle* that could be funny...
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on May 07, 2005
    I dying for a resolution here.

    cdk
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  • From ANON - mary on May 07, 2005
    This is good! When is Severus going to marry her?
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