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Reviews for Love Undeserved

By : ultra429
  • From RedsAttic on December 16, 2010
    EXCELLENT!!!

    I look forward to future chapters.....
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 01, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - xIsisx on July 18, 2006
    hmmmmm..as much as i love Hermmy Lucius fics, i find it hard to belief she would faint, just a opinion there lol, other then that good job.
    Perhapes you should try to put a little more detail into it, that was always somthing i struggled with, wanting to get the story out of my head as fast as i could i would often skip important charater building.
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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on April 09, 2005
    You have the basis of a very good fanfic, however, I don't know about other readers, but really
    short chapters annoy me, no sooner have you started to read and get into a story, enjoying it only
    to have the chapter end. Please focus on increasing the length of your chapters.

    I look forward to a longer read hopefully, soon.




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