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Reviews for The Laws of Love

By : KassandraRamsey
  • From ANON - ayu on June 16, 2005
    okay...so now hermione is pregnant...charlie is engaged 2 a collins...harry is getting married 2 his own student...n george had just submitted a petition 4 his friend...wonder what will happen next...anyway keep up the good work n hope u'll update it soon...
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  • From ANON - queenp on June 13, 2005
    just hoping for an update...*sigh*
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  • From ANON - mugglegirl0908 on June 09, 2005
    This is a really great fic. I'm REALLY enjoying it. Someone on WIKTT rec'd it a while back and I've finally gotten aroud to reading it. So glad that I did. This is a really unique and fun take on the MLC.

    And for the record, please don't feel bad if people criticize your characterization of Snape. Your Snape is truly canon Snape in all his glory. While reading a story with a Love Sick!Snape can sometimes be fun, the closer it gets to HBP I notice I'm craving more canonness. This Snape TRULY fits the bill.

    So, don't let the fan girls get you down! As much as they (and hell, even I) want him to be, Snape is not: a fluffy bunny, a simpering romantic, or a gallant hero riding on a white horse to save damsels in distress. He is impatient, snarky, and short-tempered. His nose is hooked, not "aquiline" and his hair is greasy. That's all there is to it, folks. Anyway, I love your Snape and I love your Hermione. She is vulnerable, big-hearted, bossy and smart. Just as she should be. :-D

    Good job! Keep it up!

    And now that I've paid you all those compliments...UPDATE SOON! ;-)
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  • From ANON - magicmistress on May 11, 2005
    I truely love this story. It completely cracks me up...... I love how George fainted. I look forward to how you get Fred and Ron. It is so completely compelling. I love it.

    B
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  • From ANON - GinnyW on May 11, 2005
    Ch 8~I enjoyed that chapter. Hermione's afraid to tell Severus that she's actually pregnant, eh? Hmmmm, interesting. I wondered about that, a little. I really like the developing relationship that you have going on between Melanie and Harry...it's very sweet and seems realistic, to a point. Poor Katie! I have a friend that goes by Katie Bell as her log-in name on HP sites and it makes the character seem a little more real...my heart went out to her. Good for George, stepping up to the plate like that. I'm anxious for more, I really hope that it's not two weeks for the next installment, I seriously check for updates for this fic every few days. Thanks! ~Ginny
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on May 11, 2005
    Hehehe, alot happened in this chapter, and it was brilliant! Damn Marcus Flint!

    Looking forward to your update!
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  • From ANON - Moi on May 11, 2005
    I am really enjoying this, and was sorry to reach the end of what's posted. I hope you have more of it coming! I'd offer to beta for you, but I'm useless with Wendy/Hook (at least I'd imagine so--the only one I have attempted to read was so foul I quit after two chapters). I'm really only good for mechanics and grammar anyway; I feel guilty when I start messing with ideas. So good luck with that. And I hope to catch more of this Hermione/Snape--Marriage Law story, it's very good.
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  • From ANON - akashA on May 11, 2005
    wow, i'm really looking forward to an update! it's good to see that harry is already getting a soft spot for melanie. keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - angel on May 10, 2005
    ohhh .. i cant wait in till you can update again i hope the move goes well for your beta.. i cant wait in till snape get the new about hermione.... well later

    angel

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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on May 10, 2005
    Great story, great chapter. So George will be going off the deep end as well. More soon please.
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  • From ANON - queenp on May 10, 2005
    I like this chapter...it was well done. The thing with Katie was handled well. So, did Dumbledore have them all at Hogwarts just so they could be ready for just such emergencies? Hmmm...I've enjoyed this story since I started reading it. So sad that there is a two week hiatus b/c your beta is unable to work due to moving...update as soon as you can..
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  • From ANON - angel on May 10, 2005
    hehe..george fainted! That was hilarious...*sigh* I hope one of these couples dosent exactly go from zero to lusty-love in 2 days flat....hermy and snape argue, but there are mucho pansionate feelings there so that dosent count, and harry is well just awkward...I need some real tension and anger from one of these couples....I mean they are being 'forced' to marry, just because they all happen to be 'very good looking' dosent mean they shouldnt be very bloody pissed about it....yeah yeah, good job and what not, looking forward to the double update, that will be nice
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  • From ANON - ShilohDarke on May 07, 2005
    I am soo into this story! I love how you are working all of their relationships into the story. I can't wait to see how Harry, and Melanie evolve! And What about Ron? who is gonna catch his fancy? Will he be petitioning for anyone? Oh! I am so addicted! plEASE UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 07, 2005
    I really like this.
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  • From ANON - JJ on May 06, 2005
    I like the reluctant relationship developing between Mel and Harry as well as between Snape and Herm. How is her possible infertility going to affect Harry's hope for a family? Is her parents going to like him? And what about Dumbldor? A bunch of students in the infirmiry and he says nothing? Anyway, thanks for filling us in on the rest of the gang. Who does Malfoy have at his mannor?
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