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Reviews for The Laws of Love

By : KassandraRamsey
  • From ANON - queenp on May 06, 2005
    chapter well done...loved the retaliation...can't wait to see what you have planned next...update again soon!!
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  • From ANON - angel on May 06, 2005
    another interesting chapter. reading through the different blurps about each new 'engagement/marrige' is almost like watching a soap opera where were only allowed to see the tension build before were ripped away to view another couple...but thats just my opionion, since i'd much rather read them all sepreatly...expesioly the harry and melanie match, they are great! charlie and his match? not so sure, and what about the twins? not that I want my cute twinies being paired with ne one other that eachother (hides..from broslash haters) but dont they need to be married by this law as well?...ok too many Q's, so great writting..but like this message I just wrote there are a few typo's that would be nice if they got fixed...because 'feel' was used twice in place of fell....
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  • From ANON - Samantha on May 05, 2005
    Now that is a believable Hermione and Severus sex scene
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  • From ANON - ~Rhiannon on May 05, 2005
    I simply love the ending of Chapter 7.
    Only Severus and Hermioe could use Bitch and Bastard as endearments!
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  • From ANON - Nina on May 05, 2005
    It's great. I really like this story. Please Please keep it up! ^_^
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  • From ANON - angel on May 05, 2005
    aww how nice i cant wait in till you update next so please update sooon

    angel
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  • From ANON - lisa on May 03, 2005
    addicting!! extraordinarily written!! you are talented so please dont stop. thats all i can say. please please write this story until the end. dont stop half way through i might DIE! i like the different characters love stories all being written out so you get the whole picture.
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  • From ANON - Shaz on April 29, 2005
    more!!!!!! thats all i have to say
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  • From ANON - angel on April 29, 2005
    i really like how this fic is coming i cant wait in till more comes out .
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  • From ANON - queenp on April 27, 2005
    I just found this story and am pleased with the direction you have taken it. It is well done, despite some typos/grammatical errors. (and instead of an, and things like that...)I will need to remember to check for this story. I enjoyed reading it.
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  • From ANON - wakhiza on April 27, 2005
    Ohmygosh!!!! What can I say? You have done it again. Another excellent chapter. I am so pleased with the way Hermione and Severus are feeling each other out and trying (each in their own way) to come to terms with things. (LOVED the novel bouncing off of Snape's head!) So many stories have them almost routinely falling into a lovey-dovey relationship immediately, and Seveerus immediately turns from the black bat of the dungeons to Fabio! This is much more realistic. I am also really enjoying the development of things between Harry and Melanie, this tiny little girl who has been thrust into this situation and is being abused by her own house. Everything is wonderful! Charlie and Rachel, the other three Weasleys determined to hold on to bachelor status, everything!!! I especially loved the last line of this chapter, "the first night in six years he didn't dream about Ginny". That was very, very touching.

    Please, please, please keep updating!!!
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  • From ANON - Monkmess on April 26, 2005
    I'm am loving this story. Even though it's been done a lot, marriage law fics are some of my favorite. And this is a great twist to the norm. I like that there are other story lines, not just Hermione and Snape. Please keep it going, I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Nina on April 26, 2005
    I simply HAVE to tell you that I REALLY like this story! And the thing with Charlie's so CUTE! Please, please keep on writing. It's turning out great.
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  • From ANON - cocoachristy on April 25, 2005
    I REALLY think this is a terrific story and I am glad you are updating often. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on April 25, 2005
    I liked the last part where harry did not dream about Ginny. I know it is sad, but it will be all that much harder if/when Harry is thinking and compairing her to Ginny. I hope Hermione and Severus find some common ground.
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