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Reviews for The Laws of Love

By : KassandraRamsey
  • From ANON - azulkan2 on April 20, 2005
    Great story. Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Patsy on April 20, 2005
    I'm a little confused now...the Snape after sex was not really like the Snape we had been seeing in the story before that. Which is the Snape you plan to make Hermione fall in love with? Anyway....I like the story and the Melonie Walsh character is growing on me. I was kind of hoping that she would be the one to end up with Harry...too bad you didn't make her a seventh year.
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  • From ANON - Carmella on April 19, 2005
    OK you plaied Snape a little to well, you shocked even me! Oh well the story was good, please do contiuntue and if I might ask, play down Snape a bit. I happen to have him in high regards.
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on April 19, 2005
    Coolio chapter!

    Can't wait for the next chapter, although i hope Severus stops being quite as mean!
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  • From ANON - JJ on April 19, 2005
    YEA!!! more story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Was Snape mean to Hermoinie on purpose to keep her from falling apart (as you might have hinted), or is he really such a snarky bastard? I thought he WANTED his marriage to work out if only for sex. I liked the flashback for Charlie's intended. I saw that coming for Harry a mile away - or at least I hoped it would come. I like that he's a possible mirror of Snape, but also that he didn't get a thousand proposals at once. Other than the M/M, Harry isn't allowed many happy endings in fanfic's. The thought that he might have one, if she can get around his anger, is great. I'm really enjoying your story and hoping the couples will eventually work their way to togetherness. I'm a succer for happy endings!
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on April 14, 2005
    Great story. Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Carmella on April 14, 2005
    Well done can we perhaps get more please?
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  • From slygriff21 on April 14, 2005
    Cool chapter! Update again and soon!

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on April 14, 2005
    Nice, hehehe Hermione drunk!
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  • From ANON - wakhiza on April 14, 2005
    Another great chapter! I especially liked the situation with Miss Walsh and Miss Odom. It was nice to see a young Slytherin portrayed in a positive light, and a Gryffindor less than flattering. Kind of like in 'Order of the Phoenix' when we found out that, hey, Harry's dad wasn't just a one-dimensional perfect person. He had layers, and just like everybody else his character can't be defined as black or white. Very well done!!!

    I will be looking forward to your weekly updates (please keep it up!!! there is NOTHING worse than finding a really good story that you are enjoying the heck out of and, WHAMMO!!! no more updates). It will be like a weekly treat :-) Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - JJ on April 13, 2005
    I like your approach. It's very realistic for after the war. Interesting too. I hope we get some action from Draco and his bunch seeking revenge or generally up to no good to give the story some action. Then again, just think of all the havoc that can happen with all those wizarding babies flying around. I wonder how Dumbledore will stand it? Good luck!
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  • From on April 13, 2005
    Well, first of all my personal opinion of the CHALLENGE (and just the challenge!!!) equals the disgust I might feel while being forced to drink zebra urine. I hate to let my imagination fly into a version of HP, where the ministry applies methods to Muggle-borns similar to those humiliating ones Voldemort used, regarding the disrespect for them and neglection of their free will, even if the wizarding world is nearing extinction. (I just came to the conclusion that this really makes it a challenge, an apparently difficult one as well)
    The fact that, unfortunately, I'm aware of sometimes prejudicing Marriage Law Challenge stories just because of the challenge (in this case I won't review ;) ) definitely shows the quality of your story, because YOU got me on the hook somewhere in the middle of Chapter One. This really is significant, most of the Marriage Law Challenge stories are just put aside by me, not because of their lack for quality, just because I dislike the challenge. (I promise to be more considerant in the future) Indeed, your story makes me crave for more, makes me REALLY think about what could happen after numerous new witches and wizards have been born as a result to the law. I consider the CHALLENGE (and once again-just the challenge) as some kind of "plot killer" because everytime I tried to read (or write) a Marriage Law Challenge story I couldn't even imagine a happy future for the lot. Your story is quite the opposite, maybe because of the situation that aside from the law and even with the law in mind I can imagine a really happy future. Possibly because there are other concerns to be dealt with. (Severus' face, Hermione's rape in the past)
    The secondary plot (Charlie, the twins etc.) makes it even more comforting to read. It's just charming and I'm already dying to read about Harry dealing with those flirtatious 7th-years.

    Very good, I even would say Outstanding.

    (I hope that I didn't build in some confusing part which might come off as some kind of offense. If there's something that sounds bad regarding your story it's due to a certain difficulty with English, as it is not my native language)


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  • From ANON - Sierra-chan on April 13, 2005
    Hmm this is turning out to be quite interesting. I hope you keep the chapters coming quickly. I am enjoying this.
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  • From ANON - LariLee on April 13, 2005
    This is really a good story! I especially love the Charlie twist.

    ~Lisa
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  • From ANON - Carmella on April 13, 2005
    I implore you please do finish this, I enjoy the read and the realty of it that you have created.
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