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Reviews for The Laws of Love

By : KassandraRamsey
  • From ANON - Jamie on April 13, 2005
    Just found your story. :) *Really* love it. A new and intriguing take on the Marriage Law Challenge. :) Good to see that there's more than just Hermione and Snape going on in this story. Interesting that you have Snape disfigured. I'm curious as to how he escaped with Hermione and her parents that night. :) Looking forward to more when you can; your chapters are longer than average, though, so I'll do my best to be patient. ;) lol. Please keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on April 13, 2005
    What a great chapter! Full of sadness and great hope both for Hermione and for Charlie. I hope that by helping the girl get away from Crabbe and helping to find a mediwitch that Chalie will find happiness.
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  • From ANON - Alpha on April 13, 2005
    Hmm.... nice to see a different twist on this tale. I like the Rochester/Phantom twist, too. Look forward to the rest of this. Do keep writing. It's enjoyable to read.
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on April 13, 2005
    That was one hell of a chapter.... i loved the bit where Dumbledore is trying to get a blood sample off of Snape - hehehe brilliant!

    Can't wait for the update!
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  • From ANON - Susan on April 13, 2005
    ok..usually spell better but had SHIT LOADS of wine. Weasly was dumbass spelled and should be "Weasley". I stink. sorry. but the review stands and this story rocks. :-D
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  • From ANON - Susan on April 13, 2005
    This is not going to be as long a review as it should be, but you are doing a kick-ass job on this challange. I should know, I have read about a ga-gillion of them. LOL. That said, you have not made all Weaslys assholes AND have given them a unique prominance in the story. Aside from that aspect, Hermione is not a 6th or 7th year with no choice, but a grown woman with thoughts of her own. The law sucks and the challenge has been overdone(although still fun in my oh so humble opinion), but this is a bit fresh. Keep going. Screw all the Malfoys in your Universe and make the Weaslys not so sucky. I like where you are going and it has an adult aspect that so many fan fics are lacking lately. Thank you for the read. :)
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  • From ANON - anon no more on April 13, 2005
    I've always had a soft spot for Charlie. Thanks for giving him some dignity and acknowledging his intelligence.

    Wonderful Story.
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  • From ANON - wakhiza on April 13, 2005
    Wow! I am really loving the way this is heading. This is a very refreshing take on the MLC. I like seeing them as adults, understanding that though it may be misguided, the Ministry may have a point. I am also really really enjoying that some of the other Weasleys are getting some attention! I am looking forward to the HG/SS plot progressing, but I confess I am just as eager for you to continue to develop things for Charlie. I would LOVE LOVE LOVE to see George and Fred similarly involved!!!! (please???)

    Keep up the good work!!! Update soon and often :-)
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  • From ANON - Bambu on April 12, 2005
    I'm always delighted to see the plots you come up with, they're often so refreshing. Your war survivors are a battered and bedamned lot, and so very capable of capturing one's heart and imagination. Very nicely done. I look forward to your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Stormi on April 12, 2005
    Chapter 2 - I like the way this story is progressing. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Maela on April 12, 2005
    This is a unique take on the Marriage Law fic. I like that they are adults and that they are just as concerned about the birthrate drop. Update soon. I can't wait to see how Severus reacts to his forthcoming marriage.
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  • From ANON - anon no more on April 11, 2005
    YEs! YEs! Good start. I love MLC's. This one seems to be on a different track.
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  • From ANON - dryade on April 11, 2005
    promising start. i really like the idea.

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  • From ANON - Jenn on April 11, 2005
    This looks like a begining to a really great story!!! I'm glad to see that the twins are in this story as well. Keep up the good work! I totally can't wait til the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - amsev on April 11, 2005
    GREAT first chapter. I look forward to reading more!
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